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The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« on: July 22, 2012, 03:23:51 am »
Well this is my First Topic.I love creepypasta and I wanted to combine it with Feralheart.Enjoy the Story,Totally Fake and I would love to thank Minuet,That User Really Inspired me to make A CreepyPasta.Don't go accusing me I 'Copied' or 'Stole',I just really want to make one.Sorry if I made you thought I stole or Something.                                
  


A Yawn Erupted from my mouth,"Ugh...."I groaned,having a bad back.I twisted and turned,nothing got that back to pop!I looked at my clock for a while,getting my eyes to get used to the light,it burned my eyes if I looked at something bright.I slipped off my bed,having a casual morning,Eating,Changing,Caring for the younger ones.2:00 PM,Time to turn on the Modem.

"Whoo Hoo!Take that!I get to play now,See?" I pointed to the Modem,it Blinking Blue and my Brother Rolled his eyes and fell back into his bed,still sleeping.I smirked,chuckling a bit,Rubbing in his face it was time for me to play.I ran upstairs really fast,making the stairs creek loudly.I jumped,landing on my bed and turned on my computer,Ready to play.I made it to the front screen and typed in my Password Quickly.

I stopped for one minute and looked at Tools."Hmm....Well everyone can try new things!"I clicked tools and clicked Map Maker.For the whole day I spent collecting Meshes and Figuring out how I want my map.By the time I was done,It was already around 7:00 PM.I blinked my Eyes Tiredly and saw my new map.  

I sighed with Relief,Finally Finished with the map.Weird,Getting tons of Bad Tokens and Cannot connect to server.Then I got in,Walking around my new map and saw a Charater.Behind my Computer Sceen,I made a Face,A Confused one,I shrugged and walked up  to the Charater,It was a Canine,A Flame Red pelt,Orange animated markings,black eyes,Eyes you couldn't get in Charater Creator,Sickle Tail,and With the Name "? ? ?" but there was no User.I typed in Quickly,My usual speed of typing and the Unknown Thing Answered."I like your Map..."The Letters were Orange and that's when I really got scared and Asked,Shoken up behind the Screen,"Um...I like your Mod?You know,Changing the Letter's color?".

"I don't have a Mod..." I Widened my eyes,He was getting closer and Closer to me and I kept smashing my E button.Weirdly,He was walking to me,Taking his time to reach me.I soon made it out into Cape and Yelled,"There is Something weird in my Map!!!!Call a Mod!!Now!!!" and Well,No one believed me.For 3 Weeks,I Avoided that map and One day,Had enough courage to enter the Map Again.Nothing was there and the Next day,I deleted all the files of it.

I then told the Story but No one Believed!I dropped the case and I left my Computer sitting still for a moment.Static showed and the face of the Canine appeared for a Brief Moment and the Static and Face Disappeared .I came back to my computer and continued RPing and Talking to my Friends.....
« Last Edit: July 22, 2012, 03:27:46 am by Alexis »


>mfw i see internet arguments

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Re: The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 10:43:09 pm »
Creepy! Reminds me of Slender Man for some reason.

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Re: The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« Reply #2 on: August 05, 2012, 12:25:40 am »
Yes,The static part reminds me of Slender aswell xD.I wanted to use how he scared you in the game Slender


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Re: The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« Reply #3 on: August 05, 2012, 01:01:58 am »
Yes,The static part reminds me of Slender aswell xD.I wanted to use how he scared you in the game Slender
Herp. I never played Slender but I've seen gameplays and such and it scared the heck out of me. But if I don't like creepy things, why am I here? -GASP-

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Re: The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2012, 03:45:36 pm »
i likez. buti really wanna know what would happen if you stay there and he/she would reach you. u can write this for alternate story? maybe more scary?

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Re: The Released Flame.... (FH CreepyPasta)
« Reply #5 on: April 06, 2014, 12:59:45 am »
Creepy! Reminds me of Slender Man for some reason.

I 'gree


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