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Offline Ravendarus

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Wyvern's Heart Break
« on: December 08, 2012, 05:15:18 am »
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2012, 07:31:05 am »
Fell free to leave comments, should I make more?
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2012, 01:02:08 am »
I do believe that is a charming peice of literature you have there, Ravendarus. You should make more, perhaps even a saga or series of some sort. Of course, that is only to my blatant perspective, not to put to fine a point on the subject.
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2012, 12:46:43 am »
Thank you very much, in truth Wyvern is actually based off a character in a book I am writing! So it's rather exciting. And thank you for your opinion!
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2012, 02:32:42 am »
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2012, 02:35:58 am »
Very nice.
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2012, 02:37:31 am »
Thank you kindly!
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Re: Wyvern's Heart Break
« Reply #7 on: January 24, 2014, 07:03:57 am »
...I remember. I remember Wyvern's hurt for the loss of her mate as Tsuki...And that photo...so sad...But now, I really do know now that Wyvern will be alright, hence the ending. :)

This is beautiful, tragic and epic Raven. I do too hope and wish to hear more. Perhaps soon I will be able to read your book! :)
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