A handsome lookin' character, Ms. Soul. However, mind if I ask ye' put a bit more detail into this? For example, what's his personality? His likes/dislikes? His back story/history? Are ye' basin' yer jolteon character off of Robert Chase entirely or is there some traits strayin' from the celebrity? Mayhaps addin' a bit more information will develop yer character some and give the viewers more to absorb and learn. Especially if any viewers haven't seen the TV show House MD- such as myself.
Just a suggestion, ma'am.
