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Finally we are back. Thanks for the effort Vii, like always ^^

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Screenshots of the map, WIP, still

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Here we go, map so far:


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Thanks for posting, I'm too clumsy to do that xD


Eh, we got many Lypret's places open. Why do people avoid the position of Lypret? You are allowed to kill people cruelly how you prefer. I mean, isn't that somehow a great chance to live your devilish side out?

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thanks so much for editing everything again!! :) Finally.. just thanks ^^

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Name : Ano'teros

Short : Ano

Pack: Pyrit

Age: Young adult to middle aged

Rank: Cardinal

Gender: Female

Appearance: Brown/tan wolf, large compared to other females, thin due to lack of food but also her general shape. Dark, pale glowing slitted eyes, bright, green stripe markings.

 

A hitch, a yell, the shout and the poignant pain.

 

Ano'teros' tainted consciousness was gradually regained with effort. Duration and time would heal the poignant pain, grieved over the hours in desperation. Anger had yielded despair to her chagrin, suffering almost helplessly under these circumstances. Suffocating inevitably slow under the burden, the prediction to be doomed in this environment. Her ankle was aching, sore from the repetitively chafing metal shackle, scrubbing off the fur. Loose strands were covering the ground as her restraints had broken. Her leaking personality had lacked self control, consequently led to her burst out and so aggravated her condition. Captured in the forest, loneliness and danger present, sensing the close end. The sharp hitch on her paw made her shout accidentally loudly, revealing her location and so being an easy victim to all of the possible threats. The emotional crush had exposed her fragile side, uncontrollable ire, rampaging aggressively to free herself. Unsuccessfully. Exhaustion became discernible, her shape trembling with the contracting muscles, struggling to maintain balance and saving the remaining energy. Nervousness was marking her, permanently circling the trap, the chain rattling over the earth noisily. The darkness became overwhelming, vigorousness lacking as the act was extended irrevocably, trying to sever the chain with her fangs. Unsuccessfully.


Her white jagged teeth had stained the chain, biting continuously over it, tightening her jaw around it with full force. Unsuccessfully. Nothing succeeded, not a single method, no perspective offered a chance of survival, no matter how optimistically she tried to view it. Significantly she was desiring freedom, feeling how darkness approached further unrestrained, the casting shadows growing constantly and throwing a gloomy shroud over her. Huffs were expressed by her, seeking desperately ideas, frantically trying to conceive sophistication in a plan. Her slow steps shuffled over the surface, only rocks and pebbles surrounding her. Only those objects were present. Only. Rocks. Suddenly the idea seeped in and abruptly she grabbed a stone, craning her head quickly as her bleak gaze was pinned on her constraint. Agonized and pale she directed her head towards it, countenance stricken and rigorously. The rock was hitting against her fangs as she threw her head back and with all the energy she had reserved, she tossed the object against it.  A loud crack was audible, echoing through the deafening forest and awakening certain animals, or rather, creatures unknown to her. The shackle was still present, clutched around her ankle but at least the trap was broken, having bound her to the ground for several hours, forced her to stay around this area, only allowing to walk in circles. A deep sigh of relief erupted from her chest, closing her eyes in suppression before staggering off. Off into the known direction, questioning if her absence was noticed. Days she had suffered, but finally, the misery had ended.

 

 

Personality/Main keywords to describe her: Ano'teros has two sides, multiple personalities.

 

'normal' Ano'teros : Mostly calm and taciturn, preferring organization to the chaos that could be caused if the hierarchy isn't controlled. Fears the day when her pack decides to banish her, in case her other side isn't tolerated anymore,consequently having to abide in the cold bitterness out of the pack. Despises jerks of all kind, detesting people's presences who spread conceitedness. She, herself may seem arrogant but is basically just controlled by the constant anxiousness of being discovered and banned. Can be childish, if demanded but hides this quality mostly, knowing as a Cardinal it wouldn't be clever. Otherwise her credibility in authority would be doubted, her superior position may be disapproved then. Hates also people who neglect their faith or tend to betrayal towards the pack. If not completely dedicated to their ranks and tasks, this person will never gain Ano'teros's sympathy and respect.


'Other' Ano'teros. This side is triggered in case of serious stress, can be caused when the pack's ranks are doubted or their general safety is lacking. Means, if the pack struggles, may it be food or betrayal by a member, this side creeps up. Pure aggression and ire rules this being, shouting and yelling then her normal tone. Tending to approach and interrupt personal space, continuously trying to intimidate this person. Anger is dedicated to everyone, spread uncontrollably, ignoring other one's agony in this case due to her need to eliminate everything that was threatening her composure or pack. This  side is a great advantage in fights, considering merciless and reckless behavior but a serious problem when in pack. Desperately she tries to hide this aspect of her, which is not the easiest task.

 

 

Any special abilities : None, despite her body size. Fights are usually avoided until to the inevitably, but if her pack is menaced, she will be the first one in the battle.


 

Past:

 

Ano'teros was one of a 4 pups litter, chosen to be the Cardinal according to the tradition as being directly born after the Cardinal's death. Basically her parents raised her like any other pup, trying to influence her to feel responsible for each being on this earth, empathy was what they tried to teach. Fortunately their pup was sympathetic and interested in this topic, so learned fast and with enthusiasm. Her brothers and sisters had left the pack over the years, grasping and cherishing the hope of finding other packs in another land. Up to now, no one knows if they were able to survive or not. They had left the family when reaching adulthood and so left to the parent's chagrin. Consequently, as Ano was still a pup, they focused completely on her. All the effort and energy was shoved into her education, insisting on raising a Cardinal. Unfortunately Ano's perception considered the leave of her siblings as betrayal, having to see how her parents despaired on this matter. It had pushed the family into a real misery, hoping them to be alright but on the other hand knowing better. Ano had started to feel with them, adopting the depression and due to all of the pressure, it had led to a personality split. As soon as much stress emerges, especially when she senses betrayal, her other abnormal side scratches the surface.

 

After all, her pup hood could have been considered as normal. Despite the misfortune of her siblings.



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Full Name: Tarricento (Tar-ri-sento)
Nickname: Tarro / Cento
Pack: Anaxios / Nothos
Species: Wolf / Demon
Age: 4 years
Gender: Male
Personality: split Personality, sometimes he word fights with himself. He's mad and doesnt like strange people. He tryes to keep distance from others. And hes shy and emoteless infront of females.
Abilities & Weaknesses : Fast, medium strong, has many idears which can help in different situations. Has a large flap which often brings him into difficulties.
History: Tarricento was a happy pup, since the day came when a big fire burned his home. His whole pack died and he was the only left. Tarro wanted to find a new home but there was no other pack in the land were he lives. So he was a loner for 2 years. And in this time he turned mad. He persuaded himself that he was probably the last of all wolves on earth but he was wrong then he meet another wolf. It was a light brown female with pastel blue markings and brown eyes. They were together for 1 year untill she get killed by a Lypret. Then his personalety split. He noticed that there were he was now, more wolfs were. So he is going to be one of the Anaxios.
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Preset Download? : No. But Tearless Marking's Pack.
RP Example (Very Important): Sorry cant do it now.. i g2g but i will put it in tomorrow :)


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Full Name: Dolor Amor Odium

Nickname: Dol, Vix, Ammy

Pack: Anaxios

Species: "Corrupt" Canis Lupus

Age: Adult

Gender: Female

Personality: An ambitious she-wolf, that always strives to be the best at everything. She has a very large ego, and is very confident in herself.. She is the type of creature that believes nobody in the right mind could beat her, and due to this, she can seem quite pushy. She has a very distinct 'alpha' attitude, and loves bossing others around.. Though on the inside, she can seem quite lonely through that hard outer shell.. Though that would take awhile too crack.

Abilities & Weaknesses : This she-wolf is very durable, and has lots of strength and stamina.. Though, she is not the best on speed and agility. She is more of a 'burly' wolf, and would rather ram into the enemy rather than skip around it 'merrily'.

History: Major WIP

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And/Or Appearance: Black Canis Lupus. [simple]

Preset Download? : I have a markings pack, I'll have too find it.

RP Example (Very Important): This is a roleplay example with my forum character on WarriorCatsRPG, Translucentsemblance.

The oncoming chill of the highlands always caused Translucentsemblance to shiver and shake, her large burly body continued upwards as she marched through the crunchy frosted ground.. She couldn't believe they were so far up! Or well.. She was so far up. Shaking her pelt as she paused, she watched as the pellets of ice flew from her pelt, shattering against the ground as the scattered pieces rolled back down the hill. Where was she? She had no idea, she just went for a walk, followed the scent of prey, and got here.. But you had too admit, it was pretty cool. Amber eyes scanning the misty horizon above, she leaped upwards, claws unsheathing to dig into the hardened ground to get a grip.. Swinging and swaying, her body lost footing and she began to violently slide down the hill, claws making a weak scraping sound as they slashed against ice. "Who-Whooah!" her voice roared, digging her back feet into the slip of ground below her, causing her upper body to tumble backwards and crash against the ground, quickly forming into a roll. Ow! Ow! Ow! She felt the ice dig into her pelt, causing her to thrash as she fell, pupils dilating she slammed one paw down and dug her claws into the ground, causing her body to be tugged upwards by the impact of being held onto... She dangled, body swaying as her other paw reached upwards to desperately grip the side of the mountain.. She was clinging to a thread here, if she was to let go.. She would fall to her demise.

Twitching at the sting of new cuts and bruises, she clung for a moment before lurching forward, body skidding against the ice as she slipped, tumbled, and finally rolled onto the slope, deep breathless heaves escaping her maw. Whoo! Blinking her eyes, she peered over the ledge to stare at the twenty through twenty-five feet fall.. How long had she been climbing again? Heck! That doesn't matter, how long would it take for her to get down? Coughing, the she-cat licked the dribble of blood from her muzzle, and glanced around.. It looked as if the ice was arched well enough to form steps, if she could climb down those...

Turning to her right, she pressed a paw down on the ice and nearly slipped to the left.. Mewling, the she-cat shuddered and took another step, slipping forward and becoming airborne as she slammed against the next step.. And the next. And the next... She didn't know how long she had been falling, but when she made contact with the grass she could hardly breathe. 'Cough! Cough! Sputter, Blahk! she groaned and coughed, blood drooling from the side of her mouth as she lay there for a moment, gasping for air like a fish out of sea. She stared blankly ahead of her.. Was this the path? Yes? No? Maybe? Oh man... She was lost now! Standing up with a heave, her eyes peered around.. Where in the world was she?


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« Reply #78 on: May 24, 2012, 06:07:43 pm »
Full Name: Tarricento (Tar-ri-sento)
Nickname: Tarro / Cento
Pack: Anaxios / Nothos
Species: Wolf / Demon
Age: 4 years
Gender: Male
Personality: split Personality, sometimes he word fights with himself. He's mad and doesnt like strange people. He tryes to keep distance from others. And hes shy and emoteless infront of females.
Abilities & Weaknesses : Fast, medium strong, has many idears which can help in different situations. Has a large flap which often brings him into difficulties.
History: Tarricento was a happy pup, since the day came when a big fire burned his home. His whole pack died and he was the only left. Tarro wanted to find a new home but there was no other pack in the land were he lives. So he was a loner for 2 years. And in this time he turned mad. He persuaded himself that he was probably the last of all wolves on earth but he was wrong then he meet another wolf. It was a light brown female with pastel blue markings and brown eyes. They were together for 1 year untill she get killed by a Lypret. Then his personalety split. He noticed that there were he was now, more wolfs were. So he is going to be one of the Anaxios.
Picture:
And/Or Appearance:
Preset Download? : No. But Tearless Marking's Pack.
RP Example (Very Important): Sorry cant do it now.. i g2g but i will put it in tomorrow :)


((And BANANA PIE ! Sorry..had no idear were to put it else xD))

Great that you read everything, and you seem to have a story set out for your character already, which sounds fantastic ^^ I'll be keeping an eye out for your RP example, hopefully you can add it soon? You may join the site, www.kuzimucity.webs.com and get the map download with its password, that the leader will message you once you've joined the site :P

Welcome aboard!

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« Reply #79 on: May 24, 2012, 06:10:57 pm »
Full Name: Dolor Amor Odium

Nickname: Dol, Vix, Ammy

Pack: Anaxios

Species: "Corrupt" Canis Lupus

Age: Adult

Gender: Female

Personality: An ambitious she-wolf, that always strives to be the best at everything. She has a very large ego, and is very confident in herself.. She is the type of creature that believes nobody in the right mind could beat her, and due to this, she can seem quite pushy. She has a very distinct 'alpha' attitude, and loves bossing others around.. Though on the inside, she can seem quite lonely through that hard outer shell.. Though that would take awhile too crack.

Abilities & Weaknesses : This she-wolf is very durable, and has lots of strength and stamina.. Though, she is not the best on speed and agility. She is more of a 'burly' wolf, and would rather ram into the enemy rather than skip around it 'merrily'.

History: Major WIP

Picture:


And/Or Appearance: Black Canis Lupus. [simple]

Preset Download? : I have a markings pack, I'll have too find it.

RP Example (Very Important): This is a roleplay example with my forum character on WarriorCatsRPG, Translucentsemblance.

The oncoming chill of the highlands always caused Translucentsemblance to shiver and shake, her large burly body continued upwards as she marched through the crunchy frosted ground.. She couldn't believe they were so far up! Or well.. She was so far up. Shaking her pelt as she paused, she watched as the pellets of ice flew from her pelt, shattering against the ground as the scattered pieces rolled back down the hill. Where was she? She had no idea, she just went for a walk, followed the scent of prey, and got here.. But you had too admit, it was pretty cool. Amber eyes scanning the misty horizon above, she leaped upwards, claws unsheathing to dig into the hardened ground to get a grip.. Swinging and swaying, her body lost footing and she began to violently slide down the hill, claws making a weak scraping sound as they slashed against ice. "Who-Whooah!" her voice roared, digging her back feet into the slip of ground below her, causing her upper body to tumble backwards and crash against the ground, quickly forming into a roll. Ow! Ow! Ow! She felt the ice dig into her pelt, causing her to thrash as she fell, pupils dilating she slammed one paw down and dug her claws into the ground, causing her body to be tugged upwards by the impact of being held onto... She dangled, body swaying as her other paw reached upwards to desperately grip the side of the mountain.. She was clinging to a thread here, if she was to let go.. She would fall to her demise.

Twitching at the sting of new cuts and bruises, she clung for a moment before lurching forward, body skidding against the ice as she slipped, tumbled, and finally rolled onto the slope, deep breathless heaves escaping her maw. Whoo! Blinking her eyes, she peered over the ledge to stare at the twenty through twenty-five feet fall.. How long had she been climbing again? Heck! That doesn't matter, how long would it take for her to get down? Coughing, the she-cat licked the dribble of blood from her muzzle, and glanced around.. It looked as if the ice was arched well enough to form steps, if she could climb down those...

Turning to her right, she pressed a paw down on the ice and nearly slipped to the left.. Mewling, the she-cat shuddered and took another step, slipping forward and becoming airborne as she slammed against the next step.. And the next. And the next... She didn't know how long she had been falling, but when she made contact with the grass she could hardly breathe. 'Cough! Cough! Sputter, Blahk! she groaned and coughed, blood drooling from the side of her mouth as she lay there for a moment, gasping for air like a fish out of sea. She stared blankly ahead of her.. Was this the path? Yes? No? Maybe? Oh man... She was lost now! Standing up with a heave, her eyes peered around.. Where in the world was she?


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