Author Topic: Land of Lynthia [Inactive since 21/10/2012]  (Read 43067 times)

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #30 on: August 21, 2012, 03:48:05 am »
((It's alright, we understand ^.^))
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #31 on: August 21, 2012, 08:43:07 pm »
"Heh, sorry about that I guess...." Blacki replied, sweat dropping abit when he had realized that he had made a mistake between the two. Well, when reading two minds at once aswell as your own, it was pretty hard to comprehend who was who and such. Though, the wolf was as probaly expected to; he was most defiantly interested in this, well 'Their's, offer for some sort of mission. He had to admit that he simply adored a good adventure, so this should be quite interesting.
"What about your offer, eh? I heard your friend 'left it', so it should be interesting."  He finnaly replied to the 'masked' person's question, it would be sort of benneifical to him if he accepted it anyway, as it would give him a free meal and something to do. The wolf was sort of bored most of the time, there was never enough 'action' for him since he retired as a Patrol Recruit. You might even be able to say he missed that position he once had, though he didn't at the same time.
"I will take it, do not even explain. " The canine finnaly sort of 'blurted out', the mission or whatever couldn't be that bad. Of course, he could most defiantly seeing a meer human backing down from it, but a wolf could finish it faster than man could back down from it.
Well, however perilous this mission might be, as he hadn't heard all the details quite yet, he was happy with his decsiocion. Though, Blacki might of rushed into it abit too quickly.

(Sorry for Shortness, X.X I think I might be getting Writer's block- the worst disease ever O.o)

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #32 on: August 22, 2012, 06:52:13 am »
((Sorry, again, for the slow response, the computer didn't become available until now and connection was giving me some trouble >.<
I should be able to post more often now for awhile, though!

@Blacki: *Gasps* Not.... *Dramatic pause* Writer's Block! D:
Quick! Somebody get the cure!!))



While They were waiting for the wolf to answer, Mask's eyes gazed lazily about. At least, outwardly that's what it seemed like, but really the silver irises were watching skillfully at the crowd, noting their behavior and actions. At one point Their attention was drawn to the table where Mask noticed the female that had been at the counter sometime ago, before Ralf's entry. A waitress was handing her a key to a room before departing, and Mask observed with interest. Before They didn't take much notice of the female but now They looked more closely; she appeared restless, and wary of those all about her. But more than that it seemed like she was completely aware of what was going on, that if something were to happen she wouldn't miss it. Mask also detected a few scars upon her person, a little hard to see from the distance and trying to make it appear They weren't watching but there nonetheless. A good fighter, perhaps?

Maybe she could be of some help, too? Mask wondered. Is she listening in on this conversation, or should I try making it more tempting to eavesdrop upon? Shortly after Their question was answered. Their other "target" had begun moving closer to the conversation, but was having a mishap. Attempting to hide a chuckle and smile of Their own, They saw quickly the expression upon the female's visage. Bingo. If I keep this up, perhaps I'll be hitting three birds with one stone.

"I will take it, do not even explain. "

Mask returned Their gaze to the canine before them, a look of surprise reflecting in Their eyes. That was.... easy. "Eager, aren't we?" They couldn't help the mischievous half-grin from showing up, giving an almost evil-looking look to Their features had Their eyes not spoke of mirth. Hey, it was help and They didn't even have to pay that much for it. "I like that. Hey, Lann, how about a nice big piece of cooked meat for my new friend here?" Turning around so They faced the counter, Mask called the order to the innkeeper, who gave a rather knowing look as he rolled his eyes but smiled, making a kind of "salute" gesture to show he got it.

"I'm Mask, by the way," Mask turned to Blacki, keeping the smile. "Welcome aboard to the mission! Though I feel like I should explain things to you so you know what you're suppose to do, eh?" A frown suddenly replaced the grin, as if They just realized something. "Unfortunately, I think we're short on numbers... When Ralf quit, he was doing the easy part. What we're about to do is much more dangerous. But we need to recruit quick, cause the mission needs to be executed by tomorrow. Oh what to do, what to do..."



((@Blacki: You can have the meat being delivered in your post, by the way, I wasn't sure if your character would rather have it raw cause he's a wolf so it'd give him the chance to correct the order if he wanted to x3))
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #33 on: August 24, 2012, 02:54:20 am »
((A little poke to prevent the RP from getting loss~))
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #34 on: August 24, 2012, 02:57:37 am »
(Sorry for again, be sort of 'in-active'
I wanted to give the others to post x3.
Though, if no one replies until tommorow at night I'll post.)

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #35 on: August 24, 2012, 12:13:54 pm »
(Me post)

"Just a loaf of bread would do fine." Blacki said arupdetly before 'Lann', as he had heard from before could make it back with the cooked meat. When he asked for something carnivores usuallt didn't eat, which was most of the time, people were usuallt quite shocked. It wasn't exactly considered 'normal' amomg, well, any wolf to perfer human-food like bread or even soup over their usual diet of meat.  Though, Blacki treated his little 'difference' like it was something normal that quite a few canines tended to do, rather than a 'one-person-in-perticuliar' thing, which it most likely was.
Turning his interest away from his little 'difference' which set him apart from most, Blacki smiled in a casual way to this perticuliar person. Masked was his, or well, her name. He still hadn't indentified weither this human was a girl or a boy, and by the looks of it he probaly never would.
Quite suprisingly, even to him a little, when he heard that Ralf was only doing the easy part when he quitted. Whatever, this made it all more interesting, much more interesting. It was rare to find a mission that happened to be so hard that a human decided to drop out on simply the easy part of it all. Brilliant, this should keep him occupied.
"So, since I sort of 'need to be explained to', go ahead." Blacki urged, flicking his white-tipped tail across his paws in a somewhat casual and even polite manner. Though, it was quite obvious that he was actually slightly supicious of this person, now that he was staring at him or her in quite the perticuliar manner. Or might it be simply curiousity?
Blacki wanted to know what the mission was, of course that, but to more 'minour' things, he also wanted to know why this person seemed to have no gender, and of course, a billion other questions, the list would be too long to make actually.

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #36 on: August 25, 2012, 12:15:24 am »
Name: Carina Tavian.
Age: Seventeen years old.
Gender: Female
Race/Breed: Human.
Ability/Power/Skills: Carina has the ability to enter the minds of others and view old memories and occurrences that have happened in their lives. She also has the power to take away memories if the other so chooses, but it drains her energy tremendously and so far in her life she has not done it once. She often uses her memory-viewing ability to get to know people better before actually speaking to them, like to decipher whether they are good or evil, what kind of person they are. Often people have no idea that she is delving through their memories, but some people with more acute senses will feel something "brush" their mind, and unless they have experienced memory-searching before they won't think much of it. If someone is aware that Carina is going through their memories and there is something they don't want her to see, they can put up a block in their mind, sort of like a door that Carina can't go through unless she tries hard, which she often won't. Little do people know that a door once opened can be stepped through in either direction, and some stronger people may be able to enter her mind as well, though it's very rare for that to happen - it's probably the biggest pitfall to her ability.

Appearance: Carina is a pale-skinned girl with hair the colour of autumn leaves; a light auburn colour that shines in the right light. Her hair is straight and long, nearly waist-length, and often done up in a rough plait. She has a side fringe that she cut herself, which hides her dark green eyes. She stands at just 5'0" and is of slender build, but has evident lean muscle that others should not underestimate. Contradictory to what most young ladies and women wear, Carina is often seen dressed in dress-like garments made from bear skin and fur. These garments are few in numbers, and all relatively the same; cutting off about lower-thigh area, sleeveless and low-cut. She also wears a pair of supple leather shoes (looking similar to the canvas shoes you can get today, minus the laces), soft and worn from years of work and wear.

Personality: Carina has a very forward personality that may intimidate or annoy some people. She's very honest and opinionated, and likes to voice what is on her mind, which will often get her chastised. She is very independent and likes to do things herself, when others baby her and insist on helping her out she gets irritated. Carina has a short temper, and if someone rubs her the wrong way she will often use her words to retaliate. Carina is sharp-minded, witty and extremely sarcastic, and often does not think before speaking. She is not one to warm up to someone quickly, she takes her time to get to know people and chooses her friends very carefully. But Carina can also be extremely compassionate and understanding, and she's always willing to listen to problems that others have and try to help them out. She can often make others laugh, and she can be very loving too. She's not hesitant to offer a smile and greet someone, but she does remain guarded until she feels comfortable around others. Carina can also be very good at comforting people and offering words of support. Needless to say, she has a very complex personality, but she isn't hard to figure out if you get to know her She can also be rather boyish, and has an adventurous, curious side. Patience is a virtue she has not mastered. (W.I.P - Her personality may alter as the RP progresses!)

History: Carina was raised outside of the kingdom in a very poor area, a slum. Her mother died soon after giving birth to her, weak and sick. Carina was raised by her father, who was only trying to feed and care for his daughter as best he could. Unfortunately, at the age of 12 news that her father had been shot made its way back to her; he had tried to steal food from the kitchen of a mansion belonging to a rich family. His punishement had been unlawful death, but being merely a man slowly dying as he lived in the slums, no one seemed to care. From there on Carina was on her own, and realising that she wouldn't live much longer if she continued to dwell in the slums, she took whatever little belongings she owned and made her own way, having no idea where she was heading or what was happening to her - all she knew was that it was her best shot at life. She travelled until she was 15 years old, hiding out and sleeping when she could in private property stables and abandoned cottages, consuming little food and fluid, only really living on the willpower to keep going. When she found herself close to the kingdom of Lynthia, a pair of Soldiers, brutes who weren't unkind but not lenient either, finding her of no risk to the kingdom or its ruler, leaving her in an area called "Larth," claiming her to be a runaway like the rest living there. The adolescent girl wasn't accepted there, and although they had their own rules to prevent bloodshed, she wasn't treated nicely. After living there for a time just shy of a year, Carina was on her way again, exploring the kingdom on her own, looking for a place to permanently reside and rest her wary body. And so she found herself in Zale, which is where she has been living ever since.

Vocation: Cleric, or a Cleric in training.
Strengths: Carina has a wide knowledge of herblore, she's quick and agile, she's good with animals (canines and equines in particular), she is able to use a bow and arrow rather well.
Weaknesses: Carina is not literate; she cannot read or write, she has a fear of public speaking, she can't handle babies or small children, Carina also tends to put others before herself in times of need, and although this is benificial for others it tends to take it's toll out on her.
Extra: Nothing on the character, but "I like cookies." And I'm sorry this took so long to put up, it takes me ages to think of good "histories," and with other prior committments too it took even longer than it should.


« Last Edit: September 30, 2012, 01:23:48 am by Caitlin »

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #37 on: August 25, 2012, 02:21:52 am »
((Hey Caitlin! ^.^
I love the character! Just there is something that has me concerned, and it's that she has a lot of similarities with Calamity's character, Velleity D:

    -One thing is her power, Velleity is able to see emotions with colors and it was mentioned she could probably alter other's emotions by changing the color. However, since Carina's ability is solely focused on this, that doesn't have me fully concerned, though another reason why I'm a little iffy about this is because there's already a couple of people with powers based around others emotions.
     -Next is appearance. Just like Carina, Velleity is also barefoot most of the time.
     -For Weakness, one of the things put down was that she couldn't read or write. Velleity also had this as a weakness (though the word "hardly" was used).

By themselves these aren't really much of an issue, it was just the combination of the similarities that had me concerned, you know? xD
I'm so sorry to have to make you edit a few things in your form, especially after the time you took to make it out of your busy schedule! Everything else is A-okay, except one more thing.

Did you use the code provided at the introduction page to fill out your form? It contains the correct coloring, size, and font :3


I'm going to wait and see if the others are going to post, though I hope it's soon X.x))
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #38 on: August 25, 2012, 04:15:50 am »
Ah. I can assure you that these similarities were not intentional, I actually haven't read any of the other character applications, so the inspiration for it was all mine. I'm not hugely enthused about the possibility of having to change things around, mainly because it took me a long while to form a detailed character like this, and I am in no way good at it, nor do I do it very often, and I kind of really love the character I've created xP I can if I really need to, of course, but that would probably entail creating a whole new character.

And yeah, I did use the code, I really have no idea why it came out like that. I'll try and go back and look it over to see if I did anything wrong, but as I kind of have no idea what I'm doing here I don't really know what I'm looking for >.<

Sorry for the inconveniences on both accounts.

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Re: Land of Lynthia (Open and Accepting!)
« Reply #39 on: August 25, 2012, 05:08:23 am »
((I didn't really think you were copying, which is why I'm not too concerned with it XD
Everything you've listed are pretty common things really [other than the power as it's very creative] in medieval times, in fact most people weren't very educated unless they were rich, and being barefoot isn't all that uncommon. It was just the convenience of having two characters having all of these at once.

As long as it wasn't intentional, then there isn't a problem, and I've Rped with you before :3
These changes aren't really required, and as long as no one else seems upset by it I can accept your character. Since you're still new and getting used to things, I won't have you provide a code, I can put that in myself XD
And again these similarities aren't even that big, if it was something like similar history or appearance to the dot then there really would be a problem haha.

Thank you for taking the time to fill out the form, I'm very looking forward to meeting your character as she sounds very interesting, and having a Cleric would sure be useful lol))
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...