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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #530 on: March 29, 2013, 09:39:42 am »
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #531 on: March 29, 2013, 10:38:46 am »
((Oh. You could just say it, I learnt to take offense in nothing.))
Nope. Get out. Get. Out. Move ya tail out of my cave. I told you. A million times. And you took it any way. Lemme put it in a way you might understand. THUNDERPUNCH!

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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #532 on: March 29, 2013, 02:20:10 pm »
(( I'll have to reply in a few hours~
I would just like to say something. It's kind of an awkward place in the plot to be accepting new members. And I'm afraid that Pyroraptor's app doesn't show very good grammar. ^^" It seems Okami has been in charge of accepting lately, so I'll let her decide. Juz mah two cents. ))
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #533 on: March 29, 2013, 02:21:58 pm »
(Yes I know, my grammar is not so well)

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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #534 on: March 29, 2013, 03:55:20 pm »
((@okami: do you mean "effort in" as in when me and dragonite first joined this roleplay?

And.....have you seen the article of a picture of a pitbull with baby bunnies and a baby chicken? It's really cute  :D

http://now.msn.com/boom-the-pit-bull-poses-with-bunnies-and-chicks))
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« Reply #535 on: March 29, 2013, 04:58:02 pm »
Ivorythorn hissed in protest as Leopardpaw rendered her limbs useless, ears laying flat on her skull. This was it, she'd been beaten. She'd failed everyone and exposed her weakness to Leopardpaw, and now, the ocelot would finally take her victory. Of all the things Leopardpaw had damaged, her pride had been wounded the most. Guess I'm not as strong as I..think I am... She groaned lowly, her mind deep in a haze of pain and agony.
"You're panicking, letting fear fuel your actions as you don't know what to do, and I find that adorable."
Ivorythorn huffed, going limp as if in surrender. She ground her teeth together, stooping to such a level to try and survive... It was pathetic, really.
"But I'm not gonna kill you yet, you're too much fun to play with. So I'll let you live for another day." Her eyes snapped open, searching Leopardpaw's face with confusement. What?


Foxpaw took a deep breath, not realizing he'd been holding it in the first place. He couldn't believe his own eyes, the scene that played before him seemed so surreal. Leopardpaw, his innocent little sister, was possibly threatening Ivorythorn's life. Then again, perhaps it was just self defense, maybe Ivorythorn had hurt his sister before... His mind strayed to when Lionpaw was nearly run over by a monster. Leopardpaw had been there, and something about the situation seemed off. This can't be a coincidence. Something is up with Leopardpaw. The words that the ocelot was speaking were barely audible, so Foxpaw edged closer, debating whether or not to step in. Closing his eyes, he decided that playing dumb would be playing it safe. For now, at least.

He burst from the bushes in a panting mess, as if he had been running around searching for something. "Leopardpaw!" He cried, rushing over to the two, "What's going on here?"


Songfeather's eyelids fluttered, white flickering in her vision. She felt numb for the biting cold, but she could still feel teeth in her scruff, pulling her along the frozen ground. Her face twitched into a frown before relaxing again as she was dragged into a warmer area. The calico thought she could hear the faint rattle of bones over the wailing of the wind. Her eyes slipped closed, and she was enveloped in a gentle, easy warmth.

Riverstorm let Q's scratched up body slide back into the rothole where he belonged. The somali tom didn't make a sound, only curling up once he hit the bottom. Riverstorm crinkled his nose in slight disgust. Kittypets are so soft. I'd never surrender so easily like that. He shook his head, turning to leave. The snow had kicked up again, and right now it seemed it would only get worse. The deputy returned to camp and scanned his home for his mate, but something caught his attention before he could find her. That familiar scent... It couldn't be. Padding through the snow, he made his way to the den where the scent emanated, peering in cautiously. It could be an intruder, after all.

The sight made his eyes widen, a hateful hiss escaping his throat. The calico pelt was unmistakably his sisters. "Redear...?" He called, trying hard not to let his displeasure color his voice.


Bluebird raised her head, ears pricking. "They're back." She said aloud, unsure if Eyesore was awake to hear or if he even cared in the first place. It seemed that the general decision in Creekclan was that Songfeather, for whatever reason, had slipped a needle in Rainfrost's fish. If the search party had found the calico, them surely something unsavory would happen to her Songfeather... Blinking, she stood up, fur bristled. "Eyesore, I'm going out. I'll be right back." The blue tabby stepped out, shivering at the gust of wind that hit her. Bluebird squinted, and bounded over upon seeing the figures of Stripedpaw and Silverheart
Stripedpaw reached the heart of the camp and collapsed right there, sinking into the snow with a defeated expression. She would have liked to keep up a strong front for Songpaw and the whole of Creekclan, but she was thoroughly exhausted. Bluebird was the first to rush to them, Icepaw, Cloverpaw, and Nightstar quickly following. The blue tabby she-cat let out a light gasp at the sight of Oak's corpse.
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #536 on: March 29, 2013, 05:06:02 pm »
(I am not accept or?)

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« Reply #537 on: March 29, 2013, 06:29:57 pm »
((okami is in charge so she sees who's accepted and who's not accepted. I'm going to do this post and then wait))

eyes blinking, shadow could see a white and gray kitten padding through the forest, her ears flicking as if she was annoyed. The black tabby kit smiled as he padded towards the lone kitten, his ears perked. He attempted to ignore the pain when he moved his ears, which has thorns on them from walking through the thorn bush. Walking towards the gray-socked kit, shadow lowered himself into a crouch, stalking his target with sheathed paws. this should be fun... he thought, his pale amber eyes fixed onto the targeted kitten.

Letting out a sharp yowl, shadow pounced at the gray and white Siamese, his paws touching her soft fur as he attempted to pin her. The kit struggled, her claws unsheathed as she swiped her paw inches away from his muzzle. Smirking, shadow grabbed her scuff and placed his front paws onto her shoulders, his back paws standing on her back as he pinned the angry one.

"get off of me you rotten piece of fresh-kill!"
"yeah right. So, are you lost like me or have you run away from your mother?" he said, letting go of her scuff, his voice darken as he narrowed his eyes.
"ran away from my overprotective father you sorry little termite!"
shadow flicked his tail, his claws unsheathed as she called him a name. Not caring if his claws were sinking into her fur, the loner kit hissed and lifted a front unsheathed paw to place it on her head. "do not call me termite. You will be sorry for-" before he could say more, a large brown tabby Tom appeared at the scene, his claws unsheathed and his yellow eyes blazing with anger. "get off of my daughter and then stay where you are, your coming with me!"
great...I'm in trouble shadow thought, jumping off of the gray and white kit and landed onto the forest floor, sticking to his spot as the father walked over to him. "why hurt a kitten that was being chased by rouges after his mother was attacked and probably killed?" he mewed, trying to act innocent just to go somewhere else without being forced to go with these two cats.
" being chased by Rouges that attacked your kin? Sorry to hear that but still your coming with me and don't attack my daughter like that again, understand?" the stranger scolded shadow.
"fine whatever" he said, eyes blazing with annoyance.

frozenpaw got up, her ears pinned against her head as she looked a the black tabby kit, eyes burning with anger. then why attacked me if rouges invalided your home and attacked your mother? Mother...I don't need her nor do I need my siblings she thought, turning her head over to her shoulder to lick the blood that was slowly pouring from a cut caused by the loner kit. Turning her head back to her father, she watched as hawktalon picked up the kit by the scuff before flicking his tabby tail as a sign to follow. Frozenpaw signed and followed the brown tabby with the crooked tail tip towards stormclan.
I'm in trouble for running off I guess....


after Snowpaw told lizardpaw's story to lionpaw, the golden she-cat's unsheathed claws sank into the slowly ground, closing her eyes to image standing over the scarred body of goldenpaw, smirking as if she has gotten revenge. wait..I never saw him before so why am I- she was interrupted by hearing pawsteps, making her ear twitch as she opened her blue eyes. She didn't dare to turn around to see what's going on, instead, she letted out a sigh and flicked her tail as a sign of boredom.

Silverheart dropped the body, tears rolling down her face as she closed her blue eyes. Her legs were shaking as if she ran all over the forest and her tail drooped onto the slowly floor. "w-why...d-di-did.." she said, her voice filled with sadness as she attempted to fight back the tears. She reopened her eyes, seeing the lifeless body of oak in front of her. I can't believe that he died....for a second time.... she thought, letting out a weak sigh. "starclan, why did you took oak away from me?" she whispered.

"I'm lost"
the answer made her ears twitched with fear. Tinytiger letted out a sigh in attempt to get rid of her fear (of his mother, father or older kin being nearby) and looked at the kit with warm blue eyes. "lost? Then you can stay in the nursery until your kin picks you up, don't worry little one"
"the name's badger"
"oh ok, badger" tinytiger purred, closing her eyes for a few seconds just to pick up the memories of the apprentices as kits. lionpaw...leopardpaw...adderpaw...Foxpaw...I miss them being kits....sadly sandkit and Silverkit had to die so early she thought, lowering her head to pick the kit up by the scuff when a orange Tom appeared in the scene, his green eyes blazing with anger.
"do not pick that rat up"
the nightclan leader rasied her head and turned it around to her mate, her dark blue eyes flashing with anger. "he's not a rat fireblaze. Shut your muzzle and take adderpaw home, I'll deal with badger....the kit" she growled, the fur across her spine rasied.
"he's a rouge and rouges deserve to die, all they do is kill"
claws unsheathed, tinytiger looked at him in disbelief, wrapping her tail around the kit for protection. "he's just staying for a little but until his mother or father picks him up and he isn't a rouge. If you don't snap out of it then risks are you can lose your rank and return to warrior, become a apprentice or be exiled" she threaten her mate. did he lose his mind when leopardpaw was killed as a kit? He used to be very loyal and helpful until leopardkit's death and then he snapped..... she thought again, the fur across her spine relaxed. Ignoring her mate's warning growl, tinytiger picked the kit up by the scuff and then ran off, leaving the crazy nightclan deputy behide with adderpaw.
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« Reply #538 on: March 29, 2013, 10:16:49 pm »
((Sad stories are touching. Now I guess after knowing Lizardpaw's tragic past, no one will laugh at his nonsense D:. ))

Snowpaw sighed. "I'll see if Lizardpaw is ok... He gets really depressed when he remembers his past", said Snowpaw, and entered the aprentice's den."Orange?", she called. Lizardpaw lifted his head. "Orange, are you all right?", asked Snow, approaching her curled up friend. "No. You say always I shouldn't be blamed for that, but...Me and Golden are brothers! We share the same NDA! What if I am dispicable like him, deep inside?", asked Lizardpaw, hiding his head between his paws."DNA. And orange, you have to remember Golden was a spoiled brat. You have now friends, and Golden didn't have friends he had slaves. They just liked him because they thought he was a reencarnation of a hero, I bet if you could ask them, they would say they didn't really like him. Now you have real friends. Like me, and Conan.", stated Snowpaw.

Nope. Get out. Get. Out. Move ya tail out of my cave. I told you. A million times. And you took it any way. Lemme put it in a way you might understand. THUNDERPUNCH!

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« Reply #539 on: March 30, 2013, 12:44:15 pm »
Denied, it doesn't tell. Much a story and unless you can pm me an rp sample you're out of luck. And the app was pretty lazy anyway.))
(Will rp later)

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