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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #30 on: January 16, 2013, 10:45:41 pm »
Whoa, never expected that! XD If you insist :3

Chapter six~

Hanso purred as he recieved his acceptance, he nodded. "I'll do my best, sir and so will Xander."

Xander flattened his ears, he certainly wasn't used to being in a pride unlike Hanso. Instead he said. "Yes, sir, I shall do whatever your pride wants me to."

Shadow barked. "Yeah, they're staying with us!"

Lilly watched the new members from afar, it seemed as if there was something in Hanso that everyone would believe he would be a great member. She also watched Shadow, Storm, Misha and Clover closely, they seemed in shape to be the Four but they were just pups, she was going a little bit too far in the future.

A white pup by the name of Auri sat in the fields as she was grooming herself, she yawned as she lay in the nursery. Auri was always so bored lately, but why? She shrugged, closed her beautiful blue eyes as she fell asleep...

Caylis was looking out of the clearing, into the forest, she just saw Thunder and Aria walk out together, why were they going out alone? Surely there should be more than two members in a patrol?

Lilly recieved a vision as the clouds were painted blood-red. "Blood will be spilled tonight, be careful, for danger is closer than you think..."

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #31 on: January 16, 2013, 10:49:38 pm »
That was great and quick :3

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #32 on: January 16, 2013, 10:51:54 pm »
Thank you! :D *coughcough* I voted for you and SoaringAway for winter MOTS *coughcough*

DUNDUNDUNNN, YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENS LATER! >:3

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #33 on: January 16, 2013, 10:58:23 pm »
Ah..I wish her good luck.. :9 But I cant nominat.. because I'm using a 3DS.

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #34 on: January 16, 2013, 11:02:00 pm »
Why can't you use a laptop or something? :3

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #35 on: January 16, 2013, 11:04:24 pm »
I'll PM you.

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #36 on: January 16, 2013, 11:15:46 pm »
Anyway, I hope you and Soaring get nominated, I also wish good luck to the others! :3

Chapter seven~

Hanso seen Thunder come back but with no sign of Aria, he froze as he saw Thunder's muzzle was full of blood. Was there a fight between him and Aria? He narrowed his eyes in suspicion as he looked at Thunder. Unfortunately, Thunder noticed this and growled. "What?"

Hanso shook his head. "Nothing, sir."

Riahn and Jade were hunting together, Riahn thought he saw Aria's white fur he froze. Her pelt was painted with blood. "Oh, Jade! It's your mother!" he wailed.

Jade's eyes were full of tears, she cried on her mate's shoulder. "Mother, no please, don't leave me!"

Hanso followed Thunder, he was up to something, he was sure of it! He climbed up a tree and he walked silently on the branches, he saw Thunder saying something to Jade and Riahn they left a few moments later. When Thunder was supposedly all alone, he slashed Aria's throat, making more blood gushing out. Hanso's blood ran cold, Thunder had murdered Aria! He sprang without thinking and tackled Thunder. "YOU!"

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Chapter eight~

Thunder evaded Hanso's attack, he took a blow to Hanso's side, sending him crashing into an oak tree but Hanso unsheathed his claws and gripped the bark just in time before it hit his face. He pushed his hind feet off the tree, he spun around as he was 4 feet above Thunder's head and sliced Thunder's nose with one paw, in a split second Hanso's claw ripped open Thunder's left ear. A howl of pain erupted from Thunder's maw as his eyes blazed with cold rage and hatred. "I'm going to slit your throat open, you foolish spy!"

Hanso laughed. "Oh! I'm so scared! Bring it on, you insane psychopath!"

Thunder lunged at him, knocking the breath out of him, landing on his side and he grunted before shaking his head, getting up. "Come at me bro!"

Riahn tilted his head as he heard howls of pain come from the forest, he growled. "What the hell is going on in there?" The king whispered to his pups who were sitting next to him. "Why don't you go to your mother? She'll be expecting you."

Shadow yipped. "Okay, daddy! But where are you going?"

Riahn said gently to the black pup. "Going to see your grandpa, see what he's up to."

Shadow said cheerily. "Okay, dad. Storm, bring your girlfriend with you, she seems jolly."

Storm growled, he wagged his tail playfully. "Clover's not my girlfriend!"

"Oh yeah, get it on then!"

Storm and Shadow were fighting together playfully as Riahn ran over to the sounds of Hanso and Thunder's growls but then an eerie silence split the air. He froze as he saw Thunder smirk as he stood over Hanso, he growled. "Don't tell anyone about this or you'll be in deep hell!"

Hanso growled aggresively. "Thank you for telling me that fabulous idea! Oi, Riahn, Thunder killed Aria! I saw him with my own eyes!"

Riahn gasped as he looked at Thunder and whispered. "Is this true?"

Thunder whipped around as he snarled. "So? What if I did?"

Riahn growled, unsheathing his claws. "Get out of here, Thunder."

Thunder snarled and lunged at Riahn. "Not if I kill you first and take the throne!"

Hanso gasped. "RIAHN!" He tackled Thunder, the murderer wolf was flailing his paws, Hanso raised his paw and scored his claws across Thunder's throat. "You took the girl so I took your life...." Hanso murmured.

Thunder shuddered, his eyes dark and he closed his eyes, baring his teeth in a snarl before going limp.


Thunder was dead.
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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #37 on: January 18, 2013, 04:53:35 pm »
DunDunDaaa! XD))

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #38 on: January 18, 2013, 05:41:55 pm »
(DUNDUNDUNNNNNNNNNNNN! Let's see what happens next >:3)

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Re: Upoun A Bloodred Sky He Howls chapter one~
« Reply #39 on: January 18, 2013, 07:59:39 pm »
Dang! So much detailed! Nice job!