Spot the mistake!

[wolfsquad]

Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me
And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

You added two M's instead of one? IDK
Here is mine: 'The wolf walked into the cave, dropping down into a pile of deed flowers. After an hour, the wolf got up and left the cave.' (Yea, It's an rp sample.)

[emana00834]

You will never guess nad u spelled deed instead of dead and if the next two guesses fail i win and no its not the 2 M's

[OreoHeroz]

Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

You spelled "Hercegovina" wrong.

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"Oh..." Risto murmured, relief spilling over him as he recognized Teegan's face. She seemed a little exasparated, and some prey was clamped in her jaws. Feeling sorry for her, he bounded up to her, his pelt drenched from the rain. "You need any help?" he asked her, raising his voice over the pouring rain.

((Posted by me; taken out from an RP.))

[emana00834]

No that how its selle. 1 more failed guess and i win.

[Senrova]

Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

U 4got thee full stop! Yes? No?

[Vespian]

Heres mine:
Hello guys my names Emman and I am from Europe in a small country named Bosnia and Hercegovina and it's a very special country for me

And im not making this thing up its true that im from Bosnia

Hurr.

1. You used wrong punctuation with the I'm. It's I'm, not im.
2. You forgot your periods after each sentence.
3. Need a comma after 'Hello guys' and 'this thing up'.
4. I do believe you spell its as it's (since you're referring to it is).

All that I can spot, via punctuation errors.
Also:

I will decide the winner every month or so, but sadly there won't be any prizes.

DarkPetal assigns who the winner is so please do not immediately declare yourself as the winner of this game. Besides, this is a game so it's just for fun.

As for me, I suppose I should put something in now.

Slowly it waded through the decay, what was left of the once flourishing wood. Trees stood stooped, curling their gnarled, broken arms around their naked bodies in shame, leaves lay molded together on the floor, the water stood still-careful as to not disturb the iron curtain that shadowed the wood. A sharp snap of underbrush brok the silence that it savored more than flesh.


"You'll loose your way, soldier, just as many have. You'll loose your way and I will find you. I will peel your flesh away from its harbor. I'll take your eyes and replenish my lost sight. You will cry out for aid, scratch at my body like a screaming child begging for mother's milk, and drown in your own vitals. I'll leave your tattered body at the edge of this cursed forest of dead things for all to see. Warn them so I may die, as I've prayed for so many years."

[OreoHeroz]

Hey, Vespian. I haven't seen you in a while. :3

"A sharp snap of underbrush brok the silence that it savored more than flesh."

You spelled "broke" wrong. 

"Oh..." Risto murmured, relief spilling over him as he recognized Teegan's face. She seemed a little exasparated, and some prey was clamped in her jaws. Feeling sorry for her, he bounded up to her, his pelt drenched from the rain. "You need any help?" he asked her, raising his voice over the pouring rain.

Nobody answered this one yet...

[Vespian]

Yes, it has been a while. Tis' good to see you again but alas, after this post I must roll off. Such bad timing, hopefully I can speak more to you on a later date perhaps? Take care of yourself floof.

Ah, ye' caught me. However, seeing as nobody replied to your post, I'll do it gladly.

You spelled exasperated wrong.

Slowly, the encroaching obscurity would blind those that have sinned. Engraveing it's vile sense of fear across the expressions of the dead. Defeated, the carrion would fall. Traversing into another realm of melancholy yet bittersweet solitude. There, they would be banished for all to see. Only to be remembered by the words on their tombstones and the memories of those who have repented.

[OreoHeroz]

I look forward to that. x3 Take care as well.

"Engraveing it's vile sense of fear across the expressions of the dead."

You spelled "engraving" wrong.

Let's learn more about knots.
 
What is a knot? The tangles in your shoelaces? The knot you find in a wooden plank? The inticate knots that sailors tie to secure ropes and rigging? No, the knot I'm talking about has to do with speed. (And I'm too lazy to finish it.)

[Ex0rcist]

"The inticate knots that sailors tie to secure ropes and rigging?"

You have spelled "intricate" incorrectly.

That's all the mistakes I can find.

The black mist tapered within the sweet aura of silence, seeping into the shrouds engulfing the yet serene terrains. Upon itself, engraved a dark note that may only be deciphered by one whose mind is as black as death, immensely flamed tongue ruthlessly lashing out at the rims of the light. A sick thought beholdeth, prowling in the darkness to which only our imaginations can disclose its true sickly and twisted exterior... It is something we cannot escope, death itself...