((Nice form, unfortunately just a few changes should be made.
First, the anima can't be a mix breed, only one type of animal.
Second, was the kitten your character was about to pet the baby of a bobcat or lynx? If it was just an ordinary house cat, a scratch on the back isn't necessarily life threatening unless it scratched repeatedly and she starts bleeding to death, or it was carrying some desease. The life threatenining experience also has to fit in how your character got their anima. For example, if your character was falling from a height that would surely kill them, then their anima would most likely be one with wings, so they could catch themselves. Another example would be if your character was drowning, they would grow gills to help them breath. Also keep in mind that the animal your anima will be has to be in the surrounding area. So, if your anima was going to be a bobcat, you have to be someplace where they roam and live.
Getting a scratch on the back may be life threatening, but they won't really be saved by recieving their anima. How it could save them is if perhaps the character was being chased by the lynx or bobcat, and by recieving their anima, it helped them escape. Or, they could be chased by something else or have a different danger entirely and still get that anima as long as they're in the same area.
Third and lastly, the anima mark. Its okay really, though you may want to add something like the tips swirling into each other at the top to give it more of an anima mark appearance x3
Now, for the rp. I have ideas for the characters I will be using, but I will have to make their forms later when I can get on a computer (using my Kindle at the moment). Do you guys want me to skip on to the town scene? May be a good idea to keep this rp moving haha.))
