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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #210 on: August 19, 2014, 09:26:14 pm »
maddie, just for you to know, Tigerkit and Blackkit are just born, so how can they play? xD O_O XD ))

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« Reply #211 on: August 19, 2014, 10:41:35 pm »
Oh, awhile ago there were two other kits about the same age as Ashkit so I thought they were them. I had just scanned over the kits application. I will modify it.
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« Reply #212 on: August 20, 2014, 01:24:54 am »
Bolt's POV

"Bolt. BOLT?! Can you hear me? GUYS! HELP!"
I woke up.
The cave was full of snakes. The kits were up in a corner, but the snakes bit them easily. One came up to me
and restricted my throat. "Starclan, let me die!" I managed to gasp. White flashed around me and I raised.
I thought somebody was picking me up, but I saw my body below. I let myself float up, and Bluestar greeted me.
"Your destiny was denied. Im so sorry." For the first time, the Starclan cats' eyes filled with grief.
Minutes later, the others came up.
"Hello. Bolt, would you like to join me in the Mystical Forest?" A voice said in my mind, but everybody heard.
Trout looked at me with hope. "Don't leave. Stay with us." She said, eyes full of ambition.
"Trout. The eyes that you glare will no longer see beauty. Your selfishness sends you away." Bluestar spoke.
'Selfish' wrote it's self on Trout's Back and a wind picked her up and sailed her away.
"Yes." I said.
"Very well." Bluestar's eyes were warm. A gust picked me up and I landed in a forest.
"Hello." A beautiful she-cat came infront of me. She looked like pure silver. I looked down. A yellow glow was on my paws!
A bolt on my forehead. "Fate?" I asked. "Yes, Bolt?" She asked. But my question was ansewered. Scale appeared.
"Scale!" I said. "Call me Papa, Bolt." Scale said. "Ansewered your question. " She said. "Yep." I nodded.

We walked off with joyful foxes, and prey. We didn't kill, get sick, get injuries, or drown. We could fly. And we lived happily.
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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #213 on: August 20, 2014, 11:10:19 am »
(I'm so sorry for such a late reply. The first few days of school were long and hard)


Darkstar nodded to Silverpaw, "Yes. Don't let yourself get caught."

Wishpaw was shaken off of Badgerclaw. Seeing him trying to kill Reedtail, she grabbed his tail and tried to pull him back, "No! Don't kill her!" She tried to tug him away from Reedtail.

Blizzardkit felt Kestrelkit beside him. He mewled at her, then sucked for a bit.

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« Reply #214 on: August 20, 2014, 12:24:50 pm »
Silverpaw


The tom nodded and turned to Zeropaw. "Lets go!"
As they left the camp, the tom stopted and sniffed the air, to try and catch Sunstar's scent.
But, before he could scence her smell, the tom scenced blood. "Do you... Do you smell Blood?" The tom asked, as he turned to the she-cat.

Zeropaw

The she-cat nodded to Darkstar and they both exited the camp.
She stopped as the tom stopped as well. "Probably will try to catch the scent of Sunstar..." She though in her mind.
But what she heard, was diffrent. "Blood?" The she-cat asked, as she turned to sniff the air. "Yes, I do smell blood." The she-cat spoke up.
The tom nodded and they both ran off the way where blood was coming from.

Silverpaw

As they arrived they saw Badgerclaw, Redfur leaving and Wolfheart with ReedTail on the ground, as well as Wishpaw near them.
"Wishpaw! Are you okay?! What happened?" The tom asked, as he was worried.
He turned to ReedTail, and saw that she was lying dead their.
He turned to Zeropaw and spoke up. "Go get some help!" The tom spoke up and Zeropaw nodded and ran off.


Zeropaw

As the she-cat entered the camp panting, she looked for Darkstar and found him. "Darkstar, ReedTail is dead!!" She yelled out, so loud, that the yelling went true all the camp.


BluePelt

As she was finished eating the mouse, she turned to her kits and started licking them.
The she-cat heard a yell. "Darkstar, ReedTail is dead!!" The she-cat stopted doing what she was doing and was in shock. The she-cat turned to the nearest queen and spoke up. "Could you take care iof them, for a while, until I get back?" The she-cat asked, and the queen nodded.
BluePelt, ran out and spoke up. "WHAT? My daughter is dead?! HOW?!" The she-cat spoke up, so very much worried, as she started crying. "Where is she?!"

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« Reply #215 on: August 20, 2014, 01:23:09 pm »
I could hear an alarmed yowl "Darkstar, Reedtail is dead!!" I got up and saw Ashkit shaking. I went over and nuzzled her. "Honey, stay calm I'm going to see what happened." I ran over to where I heard Zeropaw yelling to Darkstar. I caught a glimpse of Bluepelt and I realized 'oh no, Reedtail is Bluepelt's kit.' "WHAT? My daughter is dead? HOW?" Then Bluepelt started crying. "Where is she?!" She was crying very heavily. "Oh my, I'm so so sorry Bluepelt." I nuzzled her in sorrow. I licked away some years. "I'm sure she's not dead, she's Reedtail. She's your daughter."
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« Reply #216 on: August 20, 2014, 08:21:30 pm »
Waiting for Duna and Souly to post. :3 ))

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« Reply #217 on: August 21, 2014, 04:12:51 am »
Bloodclaw:
He stood there. Not knowing what to do. Bloodclaw couldn't control himself. "Redfur. Go. Get out of here." he was back to what he was like as a rogue.

Sunstar:
The reek of blood. The scent filled her nostrils. Sunstar didn't care and walked back to camp.

I like how the whole time everyone was at camp while Reedtail died. XD Amd Foxstorm is fast asleep and has no idea what is gong on. XD My god, Foxstorm. We need a spoof of this.))

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« Reply #218 on: August 21, 2014, 11:55:19 am »
Waiting for tiny tail, who is waiting for duna
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« Reply #219 on: August 21, 2014, 06:02:21 pm »
XD So true Souly! lol))

Kestrelkit let out a faint mewling sound as she felt her mother's warmth move away. She had no idea what was going but nuzzled into her siblings for warmth.


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