Lawl. I kinda fail at that stuff. Dramatic makes me laugh))
SPOTTEDPAW
Spottedpaw yawned and stretched, padding out of the apprentices den. She froze, looking around. She had heard her mother and brother leaving to hunt. Shouldn't they have been back by now? She had a bad feeling in the bottom of her stomach, so she slipped quietly out of camp. She heard a faint cry, and started to run. She ran for her life, heading towards the sound.