Your application looks pretty good aside from the grammatical errors and run-on sentences. (Though they're not that much of a problem, especially compared to what I've seen in my life... @_@) However, if Angel is only 3 months old, she never would have had a mentor since Runes don't start training until around 6 months of age. Also:
"Parents: Crystal (Mother) Max ("
Did you mean to type something in those parentheses? xD
EDIT: Do you have a larger picture of Angel, maybe one without the sliders and background stuff?