Feral Heart

Username: TheFourlinks
Character name: Soulhaze
Rank of character: Warrior
Picture or very detailed description:
Clan desired (WC, SC, RC, or TC): WindClan
Roleplay sample: The light colored tom ran swiftly across the moorland, in fierce pursuit of a large rabbit that he was ready to claim as his prey. As the rabbit took a sharp turn, Soulhaze did as well, lashing out a paw and hooking the rabbit by one of its back legs, hindering it from running. With quick reflexes, the young WindClan warrior shot forward, sinking his fangs deep into the flesh on the small furry animal's throat.

((Note: I will try to be as active as I can, but may not be able to get on every day due to... certain things that I cannot discuss here.))

Eh. I don't mind stuff like 'hun', 'dear', etc. when used in just a calm manner.. but in a fight? No.

Because when you use those words in a fight, it sounds sarcastic and just downright rude.

If the person was able to get on this site and far enough to download and play the game themself I'm pretty damn sure they can write at a level that is readable to most here.

Hey uh... Lord? While reading through your post I just happened to notice you let a curse slip. Might wanna be a little careful when you're typing things on the forums, as the rules do say not to curse. Not trying to be rude while posting this, though. ~Vio


-.- Okay seriously. Stop deleting this. If you're going to delete this, at least fix your post. I was nice and polite about this. If you're going to keep deleting this I want an explanation why.

"In the books, it happened ONCE, to Brightheart because Bluestar was loosing her mind a bit and was angry with StarClan."

May I correct you there? It actually happened many times. In Bluestar's Prophecy, happened to One-eye, who was named White-eye, and Halftail, who was once named Sparrowpelt. And it happened Crookedstar who was once named Stormkit, as well, in Crookedstar's Promise. In Tallstar's Revenge, Hopkit was renamed Deathpaw.

"First of all, if this is a realistic roleplay, cats cannot have blue eyes."


Eh... what? Cats can have blue eyes. Mostly white ones. Green tail? No. Blue eyes? Yes. My cousin owned a pure white cat with blue eyes, named Angel. Look them up on the internet, many white cats have blue eyes. I think you need to do more research on cats if you think they can't have blue eyes.