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Neon Moon [Rated M]
« on: August 24, 2011, 04:53:54 pm »

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Re: Neon Moon [Rated M]
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2011, 10:54:36 am »
omg thats so amazing! i wish i had those kinds of skills

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Re: Neon Moon [Rated M]
« Reply #2 on: November 24, 2011, 01:41:11 am »
Amazing short story! Very descriptive, I love this part:

       Blood splashed to the concrete, though whose blood it was couldn't be clear as the rain mixed it around like colors on a painter's palette. 

If you are into writing, you should persue it; you are very talented!~

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