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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #290 on: December 24, 2011, 10:15:17 am »
Kolo carried on his nose was on the ground now. He looked up and not seeing any predators he carried on then suddenly Veens scent got even stronger and he looked around. His eyes nearly popped out and he nearly fainted when he saw a dead meerkat resting on a tree. He immediatly ran up to it and smelling Veen all over it he slumped down next to it and cried. "Veen NO, this was all my fault, why did i ever challenge you, i wanted to be friends!" Kolo was almost getting hysterical when he smelled something else. He smelled the dead meerkat again and then he relized it wasn't Veen but an loner from a different clan. "Phew" he said. "For a moment there i thought it was Veen." Kolo was about to carry on walking but then he thought 'why was Veen scent on this meerkat?' Kolos heart sunk as he relized that Veen must of killed this meerkat in his angered state. Kolo knew Veen had changed and he was scared to go find him now, what if he attacked him? and killed him? But Kolo knew he had to find him so he kept going on Veens scent trail.
« Last Edit: December 24, 2011, 01:19:10 pm by MeerkatMeg »

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #291 on: December 24, 2011, 05:25:19 pm »
(Kolo was supposed to realize the scent trail ended and turn around. So i'll just rp Veen- This is happening when Kolo is thinking the dead meerkat is Veen.)

   Veen smirked, covering up Kolo's scent trail with sand. Now, Kolo would turn around, and find that the trail abruptly ended- And last, be lost out here for a couple of days. Veen continued to cover the scent trail with dirt, and finally when he was near the Whisker mob, he stopped. No scent was left behind at all. Kolo would be lost out there for a while- More than likely days. Veen stood tall- Kolo's location was so far away, Veen couldn't even see the tree where Kolo grieved over the lone meerkat. Veen shivered in sweet revenge. He wanted to be with Salahari more than anything right now, but... How would she react to his presence? Whimpering, he realized he was stuck. Wait... Yesterday, when Salahari picked Kolo, she said 'Bye, my love.' So... Does that mean Salahari still loves me? Veen's mind churned. She had to still like him. Maybe him and her could get attatched while Kolo was lost, and then he'd have another chance! Veen stepped into the clearing, and went into the burrow, searching for Salahari. He found her, sleeping peacefully. Kolo's scent was all over her, as usual. "S- Salahari?" He asked, waiting for her to wake up.


(LOL that was a little confusing. Quick summary: Veen got Kolo lost way out in the desert. Kolo should be out there for a couple of days. Veen came back to Salahari, hoping him and her could get close untill Kolo comes back- And she could then choose who she really loves because the other site is going to be deleted and I don't think kolo and Salahari are actually mates right now- Did Kolo ask her?)

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #292 on: December 24, 2011, 05:52:51 pm »
oh ok  ;) ))

Kolo suddenly stopped, Veens scent trail had disapeared. He turned back and his heart sunk. Where was he? Where was Veen? He could have sworn Veen was here somewhere. Suddenly the thought hit him. 'SALAHARI' Veen must have tricked me. Kolo kicked the ground, How would he get back to Salahari now? It all makes scense! Veen tricked me into thinking the dead meerkat was him then he covered mine so i couldn't get back. Now he will have his dirty little hands all over Salahari! Kolo snarled. "WHY DID I EVER THINK HE COULD BE MY FRIEND!" He franticly scent marked the ground whilst cursing himself. It was always his fault! He couldn't blame Veen, well he would proberly of been in this situation if Salahari hadn't picked him. Kolo wept. "I'll never see my love again! and Veen will proberly have pups with her and....and..They would live happily ever after!" Kolo collapsed not looking out for predators, little did he know trouble was on their way.

BTW Kolo runs into a rival group and they take him in and the DF loves him but he dosn't and survives with them for 3 days before escaping and finds his way back to Salahari! AND Veen has convinced Salahari that Kolo got taken by a bird of prey so SHE has to pick him! and then when Kolo comes back she has to pick who was the best mate! SO EXITING >:D))
« Last Edit: December 24, 2011, 07:45:01 pm by MeerkatMeg »

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #293 on: December 24, 2011, 06:53:50 pm »
o_o))


Salahari yawned, stretching her agile boy out. The meerkat churred quietly, shaking out her fur free of dirt and sand. Her ears perked at the sound of her name, it didn't sound like Kolo, It sounded like....She hissed turning towards Veen and hissing dangerously. "Why are you here?" She hissed, baring her teeth and lowering herself into a battle position. Her tail flicked angrily, narrowing her eyes.

(This might happen: Salahari thinks Kolo left her for someone else so she is really sad and more hard to get. Then she is still angry at Veen, but when Kolo comes back she is still angry at both of them, so they have to start from point 1. o3o))
« Last Edit: December 24, 2011, 06:55:24 pm by Meowzers »

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #294 on: December 24, 2011, 07:44:17 pm »
ok  :o ))

Kolo layed there. "All that matters to me is Salahari, and now she is lost forever....there is nothing to live for" Kolo closed his eyes and chorased what his mother had said to her mate. "Love..can touch just one time........and last for...." Kolo started crying. "a lifetime..." Seeing that he had nothing to live for he wasn't even bothered when a rival meerkat came up to him and started biteing his ear. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE IN OUR TERROTRY!" The meerkat growled. One by one more and more meerkats joined there leader and surrounded Kolo. "ANSWER ME!" Kolo burst into tears as he remembered the leader of HIS group: Salahari. The rival leaders snarl faded and she said. "Come with us" Kolo got up and followed surrounded by rival meerkats. When they got to there burrow it was almost dark. The female leader told Kolo he could stay there for the night. Kolo went below ground and not feeling comftable sleeping with another group and found an abandoned chamber by himself. He started to fall asleep when the leader joined him and curled up to his side. Kolo slowly moved away but the female kept coming closer. The female said. "You know I don't have a domanant male and there is not a unrelated male in the group. But there is now.." The female edged closer but Kolo squashed himself against the wall. "No I have a mate! I mean I used to have a mate..I mean I love someone else!" Kolo struggled to get the words out as he thought of Salahari. He wondered what Veen was doing with her now. UGH he couldn't think about it. The female smiled. "I'm Hannah(lol, random thought of name) and i think you cute do you want to have pups" Kolo couldn't believe his ears. "NO I TOLD YOU I ALREADY, I LOVE SOMEONE ELSE" Kolo crawled out the chamber and into the deepest part of the burrow then fell asleep there. Little did he know Hannah soon came back and curled up with him.

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #295 on: December 25, 2011, 02:01:35 am »
(I like meow's idea... Can Salahari forgive Veen? O.o )

Veen flinched, submissive behavior covering his body. "S-Salahari, I came to apologize..." he whimpered, glancing around nervously. "I'm sorry for what I said... And did to Kolo." Acting as if he hadn't just gotten the male lost in the middle of nowhere, he stood up slightly. "I want to tell him myself... WHere... is he?" Shaking his head, he peeped, "More importantly... C-Can you forgive me, Salahari?"

(O-OH!!! What if Kolo breeds with Hannah, then he leaves her when Hannah's old mate returns- Then Salahari would feel he left her for Hannah, but then the pups of Kolo and Hannah come back... Kinda stupid but... Again, I like meow's idea c: )
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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #296 on: December 25, 2011, 12:05:54 pm »
Salahari lowered her ears, glancing around the chamber. "W-W-Where's Kolo?" She asked, moving past Veen gently and looking outside. "Where is he?" She spoke, narrowing her eyes and looking around more desperately. Salahari looked at the ground, making a low, dangerous hissing sound. Her tail flicked back and forth as she narrowed her eyes to slits. "Where.." She spoke, glancing at Veen and baring her teeth. "IS KOLO?"

(She completey ignored him by the way, but Kolo would have to start from point 0 if he breeds with Hannah ._. Cus Salahari wouldn't forgive him for DAYS))

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #297 on: December 25, 2011, 02:57:17 pm »
Veen peeped, rolling over. "I don't know! I came here, and only found you..!" He knew she thought that he had murdered Kolo. But... In that case, blood would be covering his maw. Salahari should know that... He thought, glancing around nervously. "S-Salahari... On my way here, I scented Kolo's scent and another female meerka-" He stopped, anger covering his face. He did, infact, scent kolo and another female on the wind. "That worthless, cheating piece of..." He growled, standing. He waited for Salahari's reaction.

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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #298 on: December 25, 2011, 04:48:30 pm »
NO Kolo won't breed with Hannah UGH xD))

Kolo woke up the sound of birds rang in his ears. As he blinked he saw something curled up next to him and he jumped back as he saw it was Hannah. "I thought i told you to go away!" he shreaked before remembering that everyone was still asleep. As Hannah opened her eyes Kolo saw fear in them. "Sorry" he whispered before going outside. No one was up yet and Kolo sat alone on the edge of the burrow area staring at the sun coming up. Kolo surpressed a tear; he could of shared this was Salahari. Hannah soon came out with the rest of her gang and a young adult about 1 year old came up to Kolo and sat next to him. "Hi i'm Tom(Another random made up name xD) and Hannah is my mother, she has been looking for a mate ever since I was born and shes getting desperate. I'm sorry" Kolo looked at Tom and said. "It's not that, its just I have a mate in my old clan well at least I did until i went looking for my friend. And because my friend loves my mate he tricked me into thinks a dead meerkat was him then covered my trail so i couldn't get back to my mate and now hes proberly got his dirty paws all over her...but i still like him...but he hates me, he even tryed to kill me once." Tom looked scared. "I'm so sorry" he said. Kolo put his paw on his head and churred. "Thanks, one day you will have all this trouble with love" Tom giggled and a glint of amusment flashed in Kolos eyes. Before Kolo could say anything else Hannah called for the foroging party. Kolo sighed and just wished he could curl up with Salahari but that proberly will never happen not now... he sighed and followed Tom to go and eat.
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Re: The Meerkats of the Plains
« Reply #299 on: December 28, 2011, 06:03:50 pm »
Kolo scanned the skys for danger as they reached there foroging spot, he didn't really feel like eating and was just thinking about Salahari all the time. He was thinking about sneaking out of this group and going in search of Salahari but then he would be vunerable of predators and he might get even lost! 'Just a few more days' he thought. He looked to his left and saw a giant Cobra! He peeped the snake alarm and everyone stopped foroging immediatly and they all spotted the snake and charged towards it; tails raised and mobbing there heads to itimidate it while spitting and growling. Kolo disided he had nothing to lose and joined in the fray.