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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #810 on: February 21, 2012, 06:32:06 am »
Akira wandered around in the forest...searching for some berries to eat.Then suddenly,she spotted one.."Aha! there's some"The she-wolf leaped and tried to catch the cherries."Oh darnet!!"She frowned,and tried again.Then Akira finally caught them.She then carried the cherries to a small den that no-one seemed to live in and fell asleep with the cherries that she caught were right next to her paw.
(this is my final edit...its like i cant RP right :(  )
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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #811 on: February 21, 2012, 06:58:18 am »
((Um, Lilly, there are a few things wrong with your text...

First, a fight is going on. I don't think it'd be natural for Akira to casually walk up to Lorcan and Vanth when one is nearly about to kill the other and declare they need sleep. Two, Lilly shouldn't exactly be there yet, she needs to meet up with the pack properly and they have to accept her in. Thirdly, the same goes with Amioo's characters cause they're not in the pack either. Basically, Lilly isn't suppose to know everyone yet and vise versa 0.o

Have you read any of the previous posts?))
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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #812 on: February 21, 2012, 01:48:53 pm »
Cross nudged Camille and the pup ran away, leaped up to a high tree branch, and hid there. Cross stood in defensive position and growled "Don't you DARE touch her. If need to I will kill you if you don't nap out of it!" And with that, the fight was forced. The smaller fae dashed around the cave and stood at the mouth of it before leaping at Vanth with only a whistle from the wind.

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #813 on: February 21, 2012, 06:49:52 pm »
((i edited))
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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #814 on: February 21, 2012, 08:31:32 pm »
I think you need to edit it a bit more, a nervous wolf wouldn't come up to a pack of wolves; including with others that was attacking one another. One would just come up, "Um can I join?" you should have her stay back and watch, and then maybe come up when things have died down. )

All the air rushed out the white wolf's lungs a Vanth tackled him, the look in her eyes were different though. THe crimson eyes of the she wolf look like they had been cleansed of the blood lust; a new emotion shown, it was sadness. Lorcan knew that the Vanth he new was still in the she wolf; the strength of the bloodlust had taken over her body. As The black she wolf bent down to the his neck, Lorcan closed his eyes and awaited a bit to the throat; he though for sure that he would be struggling for breath, even more then what he was now. The bit never came. Only the voice of Vanth, I can't hold it off anymore. this conferred the male slightly. Air rushed back into Lorcan's lungs as the weight of the she wolf vanished; the sound of paw steps leaving the cave reached his ears. He stayed there for some moments, listening to the sound of Vanth's voice as she confronted Cross, this wasn't going to end good.

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #815 on: February 21, 2012, 10:26:12 pm »
Spades jumped down from his tree behind Vanth "very  interesting just a moment ago you seemed to have control. Seems your too weak for your other side." he said smugly trying to tick her off. He then looked over at Cross "ive got this just take the pup and stay back i dont want you to get in between this " with this he gave a crazy smile and his eyes turned its bright red. Knowing he might not be able to win he was getting ready to get his body back from his bloodlust.




















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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #816 on: February 21, 2012, 11:20:30 pm »
(Meh sorry! I couldent find the thread XD
Katsa: That would be great<3 Cyris can even kidnap Thirteen if you want him to. But its really up to you.
SilverDawn: Yep XD She deffo is
Lilly: I agree with the others. Please allow your wolf to wander around for a while before they meet with us and please read our posts.)

It suprised Kali greatly that Zero had not reacted to her behavour in the angry way she was expecting. Maybe he was simply used to her flirty actions and they did not come as a shock anymore. Or maybe he liked them? The coffee coated female giggled aloud at such a thought. "I dont know," She whispered her reply, her laughter fading to thought. "Xander is weak in the mind, but phisicly strong...But he only loses it when he is troubled...." She explained in a serious tone.

Thirteen remained at a distance, the shrill yelling and arguements pained her inside. Was Mother sure that these creatures could change their ways?

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« Reply #817 on: February 22, 2012, 12:31:02 am »
Xander began to creep towards Vanth as she spoke to Cross, a dull and ill tempered smirk across his jaws. The grey and white male could visualize his canines sinking deep into her neck and her blood coating the cave crimson, it seemed like a peice of bittersweet paradise to Xander. He chuckled darkly under his breath. She wasn't even paying attention to him anymore, which was disappointing for him as Xander was lusting for a long and terrible fight, but this was going to be childs play. He continued to slowly make his way towards the corrupted female and did not halt even when his cold black eyes met that of Cross and Locran. He had no sanity left...
 
He was less then a meter away from her when suddenly Karma stepped into view, and Xander wasn't sure how he could or should react to this, but he instantly froze and his eyes became fixed upon the silver female, and he was not really sure why. For a long while, Xander said nothing, his iris's still holding a large amount of blood thirst and hatred, but every few moments they seemed to flicker with some kind of sorrowful emotion. Regret?...
 
"Why should I listen...to you?" He suddenly stated, his voice surprisingly controlled and as though both sides of him were speaking as one and agreeing instead of fighting. "Why should I?...When your the reason I lost myself?..." He asked in a mere whisper, the smirk from his jaws had faded to a frown.

 
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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #818 on: February 22, 2012, 12:47:00 am »
((@Luna: Alrighty! Just I don't think he'd kidnapped Thirteen unless told to do so or there'd be something to gain from taking the cat haha.
Did you have something in mind?))


The crimson colored male kept a few paces away from both Kali and Zero, his gaze fixed intently on the fight. He stayed within their sights though at a respectable distance, seeming to be off in his own world as the battles unfolded. The story he heard from the cat replayed in his mind slowly and deliberately, all of it sounding like childish, fantasy junk conjured up by a foolish mind. Love and kindness the cat had said they needed, yet all he saw between this pack was the lust to kill. They were hardly any different from his own pack, and now they wouldn't even have to lift a finger to be rid of them.

How convenient, Cyris thought silently to himself, allowing just a small twitch of a satisfied smile to cross his features. If any happened to look his way, it'd barely be see-able against his dark fur.


~*~*~*~*~

Calm, Dusk always kept calm. Despite the chaos going around him, Dusk sat in the very same spot he had been with his sister even after she ran toward the cave. It was something he expected and knew it'd be a waste of breath to stop her, so why bother? Even so, as shouts filled the air and fights were breaking out, there he was. Expression impassive, one would think he was merely enjoying a peaceful night. Dusk had a leash on his emotions and through the chaotic storm his mind was flowing steadily on it's track.

Finally, though, the male slowly rose on all fours. Steadily his eyes gazed about him, pushing away the madness going on to glance carefully toward the trees. A strange feeling had settled on him, the kind you get when threatening eyes were watching you, the fur on his nape bristling lightly furthering the feeling. At first he thought it was because of Vanth and Xander, but this was different. A nagging voice echoed in the back of his mind, but finally he turned toward the cave.

Vanth had stormed out, what had happened to Lorcan, Xander, and his sister? Letting Cross and Spades take care of Vanth, he quickly headed to the cave mouth, pausing only to investigate what was going on within.

"Lorcan," his voice was hardly a whisper, though the cave increased it's volume. Silently the male stalked toward the fallen snow-colored wolf. As far as he could tell, no wounds marked his body and he was breathing. If anything, he just seemed daze. "Are you alright?" he whispered to his ear, taking a moment to glance up toward Karma and Xander. A fight didn't break out between them, but deep inside Dusk's heart beat quickly with each passing second.


~*~*~*~*~

Vaguely Karma was aware of her surroundings but only to an extent. She had no clue what was going on between Vanth or Lorcan, she didn't even know the demonic female had left the cave. Her attention was fixed mainly on the male before her, for even getting distracted for a split second could cost her her life.

At his words, Karma flinched back, setting her jaw. But she kept her gaze fixed on him, eyes softening with regret (of which she thought she saw in his own eyes) and shame. "I'm sorry," her voice remained strong and clear, but was coated lightly with sincerity. "I spoke out of anger. I did not mean to hurt you and it was the last thing I had wanted to do. But don't you see?" Here she took a cautious step forward, almost casual-like and quick that it may have hardly been noticed. "See what emotions make others do to those they care for. Because I allowed my anger to cloud my mind, I had hurt you without meaning to. Emotion is clouding your own mind and hiding who you truly are, making you believe you want something that you don't desire. We're your friends and even family, and I know you do not want to harm us." Again, just as cautious, she tried another step. They were agonizingly slow and made little progress, but a sudden movement could break the spell.
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"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ Accepting please join!
« Reply #819 on: February 22, 2012, 01:36:18 am »
Vanth smirked at the fae until her attention was stolen by Spades. A large smirk grew across her maw `Bring it Dog` she growled. Her canines itching to tear through the soft tissue. She took a small step towards him and smiled. A sudden unexpected giggle exited her maw. `This is great, you pups think you can actually fight me off. Ha, don't humor yourself` she said with a small smirk. She began circling the male, her ears twitching as she listened to his breathing. Her lips curled up slightly into a smirk, exposing her razor-like teeth. She snapped at him playfully than giggled again. Her tail swayed behind her, as though it were a game. She smiled and kept her pace steady as she seemed to dance around the male. Her eyes narrowed as her smile turned to a pure threatening growl. She lunged at him unexpectedly, taking him down. She lunged off of him before he hit the ground landing softly on her feet. `Ha, point one for Vanth` she smiled. Her mind thought of it as a game, the outcome always the same. Her prey would fall in bloodshed. Vanth's eyes flickered towards the cave and stuck to Lorcan as her complexion softened for a silent moment before flickering back to her prey. Her complexion hardened again. She smiled once more `You turn pup` she growled.
I solemnly swear that I am up to no good.