Dogs of Japan~ A Dog RP Awesome Map Done!{Accepting!!}

[Wolf}]

umm... Could you make the Ro Sample better? I really hate to have to say No. We only accept Semi-Liberate to Liberate.

[OmegaToAlpha]

I Edited it :3 Thanks for the second chance.

[Wolf}]

Much better :3 Acceptted! I'll add you soon.

[OmegaToAlpha]

Thanks :3

[Wolf}]

Welcome.

[OmegaToAlpha]

Thanks o3o Ill be on Um. Alot xD

[Wolf}]

ok Well Rp days are Tuesday and Thursday, Anyother day is welcome but Won't be recorded. And just so you know this Rp hasn't rped since september due to other RL reasons.

[OmegaToAlpha]

KK, thanks

[duskpaw1]

I have one thing to say about the rp sample. When we rp be aware of commas and periods. You will find that I am kinda critical about that. I normally do not point it out but I did notice you had many mistakes. Also be aware of capitalization in the right and wrong places.

Now: Sadi Slunked low to the ground as she hurryed across the road, Aware of a Car comeing straight at her, She reatched the other side and Sighed with relief, "Made it Again" She Frowned as her stomach growled A 'Human' Threw down a bag, She Sruck her nose inside and Spat, It smelled like rotton Mouse! She stalked away, Frowning, And hungry...

Correct: Sadi slunked low to the ground as she hurried across the road, aware of a Car coming straight at her. She reached the other side and sighed with relief, "Made it Again." She frowned as her stomach growled. A 'human' threw down a bag. She stuck her nose inside and spat, it smelled like rotting mouse! She stalked away, frowning and hungry...

[Jessie Dagger]

ok Well RP days are Tuesday and Thursday, Anyother day is welcome but Won't be recorded. And just so you know this RP hasn't rped since september due to other RL reasons.

@Wolf: September? We rped in July XD, It hasn't been a year has it? O.O unless I was brainwashed *Looks around nervously*

Taylor: Yeah you are right, they have the 'Running Sentences Fever'. Don't worry, I used to get that all the time in ILA. I don't do it nearly as much now, ha ha.