Author Topic: ::Foxes of Ireland:: [Literate, long-term fox role-play with map and forum]  (Read 48399 times)

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Thanks for answering my questions, Tangle. Would you like to be mod on the Foxes of Ireland forum, since you're helping out, and you're the preset creator for the group?

Also I can't wait for your application, Holly!

Also guys, Lugai is away to visit her aunt in Northern Ireland, which explains her disappearance. Just an answer for those who are wondering where she is.

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Sure! :3 I was a mod on my old fox rp so I know the ropes. I'd gladly help out~

And oooh~ I hope she's having fun -shot-

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Okay. I will make you a mod. Now... I shall leap away saying, "Annie, are you okay?"

-has gotten a music player and CDs of the music I like-

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Okay, time for the application, >:I



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[Name] Naomi ( Pronunciation: Ny-oh-me; Origin: Hebrew; Meaning: Beautiful, pleasant, delightful )

[Gender] Female

[Age] 18 months

[Personality] Kind, caring, loyal, fierce (when angry), motherly, friendly

[Species] Cross fox

[History] Naomi grew up with her mother, father, and brother. Her mother and father went out hunting
one day and they didn't come back, the curious kits ventured out of the den to see if they could find them, they did..... Dead. There lay her mother and father, gashes and scars were all over them, they were helpless, her brother, Balin, looked around and shrieked. Naomi looked around the forest and then saw the killer, another fox, only huge! Wait no... It wasn't a fox... It looked different... Well whatever it was, Naomi ran away from the death scene, not wanting to become like her mother or father... She turned and saw her brother wasn't with her, she gasped realizing that he must still be at the place where the fox- thing was! She ran back only to stare wide-eye into her brother's eyes, he laid dead in front of her, his eyes wide with panic and horror. She whimpered and ran away crying, her whole family was dead! Soon after that horror scene, about a week later, Naomi laid curled up in the bushes, her ribs showed and she was starving to death, then a fox appeared, she said her name was Nisa, and that she would help her. Naomi came with her, and as Nisa had said, she would take care of her. About a year later, Nisa died.. But this time Naomi knew it was Nisa's time to go, she now knew how to protect herself, and hunt. She was skilled at fighting, she knew that. She laid next to Nisa's limp body to morn her, and then the next day she buried her and then ever since she has been a loner fending for herself to survive.

[Rank Desired] Deputy, but since you don't know me well, I can go with warrior or hunter if you wish.

[Mate] N/a

[Offspring] N/a

[Role-Play Sample] <Naomi>: Naomi sighed and then stretched, she looked around the burrow she was in, and started to think about the den, it was so much like her birth den... Naomi shook the thought away and knew she had to hunt or starve. She shook the remainder of the bedding from her pelt and then sniffed while walking from the den, she could smell the faint scent of a rabbit. She tracked it to a clearing and then crouched in some tall grasses. She stalked over close to it, but as she was about to pounce, another fox darted out and caught it, Naomi growled, then stiffened, why had she not scented it? 'I must be going nuts' she thought to herself, as she was about to turn around, she noticed the fox was staring at her, she narrowed her eyes and then cocked her head.

<Unknown fox>: "Hello, who are you? Why are you here?" the she-fox said, her eyes glimmering in the morning light. She had never seen this fox before, it wasn't of her coven, she looked to the fox, she was skinny, not from another coven.. It was most certainly a loner.

<Naomi>: She almost turned and walked away, but decided it was best not to. She stared at the she-fox, she was a red fox, she looked around, cautiously, hoping this wasn't a trap or something like that..She finally answered in a mumble.. No more a whisper, "I am here because.... Well I am a loner you see.... I was just tracking that.." She nodded to the dead rabbit, it was so odd to her to be talking to another fox, she had not talked to any fox for this long for 8 months, because 8 months ago she lost Nisa, her adopted mother..
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<Unknown fox>:"Oh that? Sorry I didn't know you were preying on it to.." The she-fox looked at Naomi and then smiled, she sat and looked to the rabbit that back into the loner's eyes. Her ear twitched as a fly buzzed around it she growled and then it flew down near her tail, she swatted at it with her long fluffy tail. She looked back to the lone she-fox, her eyes glared at her, she wanted the loner to take the prey, but she wasn't going to tell her that.

<Naomi>: Naomi stiffened, the she-fox looked at her her as if she were beckoning her to take the rabbit, then she shook her head, "Uh.. I better go.." She turned and started to pad back to her den, she growled, she should never had gone out, why had she not scented that fox?! She shook her head, she must have just been off or something..

<Unknown fox>: The she-fox yowled to\the loner, she was cautious, but that fox seemed... Just.. Well Useful? Nah... She yowled to the Lone fox, "Wait! You could join us!" Such an odd question to ask a fox, and a lone fox for that matter! Was she totally out of her mind? She thought about her own sanity and then looked at the lone she-fox, she looked... Just well she looked like she was meant to come with her or something, was it a sign? A sign that meant this fox was supposed to be in the coven?

<Naomi>: She turned and then stared directly into the she-fox's eyes, then I repeated the sentence, though in a question, "Join you?" she croaked, never before had any fox ask her, or more yowl to her such a question...

<Unknown fox> She answered, her golden eyes gleaming, "Yes... Come with me.." She picked up the rabbit and padded into the woods, not stopping to see weather the mysterious loner was following her back to her coven.

<Naomi>: She narrowed her eyes in the direction the she-fox had taken and then looked around cautiously, then she padded after the she-fox, she didn't know what she was getting into. Her pelt brushed across many leaves and she stepped on a thorn, she growled siting and looking at her paw in the dim forest light, she couldn't see the thorn, but didn't want to loose the mysterious she-fox, so she limped on, going through the green trees, the birds chirped and she listened hearing a woodpecker, she then looked in front of her, and saw the fox had stopped near a cave entrance, "Why have we stopped here?" Naomi asked.

<Unknown fox> "We have stopped here, because we have arrived at my coven" She smiled and then walking into the cave.


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Jessie we kind of role-play in 3rd-person so its best if you were to change ur rp sample to be in 3rd-person. And idk bout depuy, its up to Crystal's decision.

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Okay, I will change it, I am not too sure I know what 3rd person is, but that's only because I have never found the term before, but don't judge me because I don't know what it is e.e

Edit: Okay I have now edited my role-play sample, if it still isn't okay, I will redo it entirely.
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No judging here :3

It's an improvment from before thou~ The only thing that kinda gets me iffy is that, despite ur sample being good, perhaps deputy isn't what you should start out with. I mean, the real decision is up to Crystal but personally, what we could do I think, is have you start out as a runner or any other rank of your choice, and work your way up to be a deputy. But again, Crystal's decision.

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[Name] Sierra
[Gender] Female
[Age] one year
[Personality] Sierra is extremely nice, and although she's growing up, will always be a pup at heart. She's very outgoing and will greet anyone with a smile and a waging tail. Sierra tries to be funny, and tries to lighen up any bad situation. Sierra doesn't take the time to think too much, so every once in a while she'll have a dumb slip up, but really she's a very bright fox. You'd think that a sweet girl like her would know how to love, but in reality, Sierra has little to no idea what love is. For her, 'i love you' is easy to say,  because she doesn't know how what true love feels like.
[Species] Arctic fox
[Personality]Sierra was born to two not so loving perants. Obsidian, her father, and Alexis, her mother, would treat her like dirt. Nobody really knew why they did, either. Sierra was the first born of the litter. Maybe it was bcause of the frail frame she had that resembled more of a runt. Sierra was a weak pup, that was for sure. Her brother, Frost, was treated lke royalty. He was a bit of a brat, too. Frost would say things to Sierra that cut her like a knife. Sierra was treated like this for half of her life, then when she was able to, Sierra left her home. She had made a few friends along the way. They were loners, like her, so they traveled some of the way with her. One of her friends, Tres, had feelings for her, and Sierra felt the same way about him. But being her naive self, Sierra had no idea what to do when she liked someone, and didnt think that Tres felt the same way about her. When Tres confessed his feelings for her, Sierra was overjoyed. She and Tres became mates, but Tres left Sierra a few days later. Sierra didn't know that Tres only wanted her for sex. She was heartbroken. Sierra met another male after her and Tres parted ways. This male, named Euros, was just like Tres. Although he didn't get as far as Tres did with her. Sierra's friend, Rakuen, knew what Euros was up to, so she told Sierra. Sierra thought that Euros really liked her, just like Tres. She left Euros, and decided to just stop trying altogether. So now if there's a sighn that a  male has feelings for her, Sierra will stop talking to them in order to keep her heart from breaking again. Even if her true love comes along, Sierra won't know. She doesn't want to hurt anymore.
[Rank desired] Hunter
[Mate]none
[Offspring] none
[roleplay sample] A light figure trotted through the forest with light angelic footsteps. Her head was held up high and a smile upon her face. If you listen closely, you'd be able to hear the female humming "Its a great day to be alive, i got the sun still shinin when i close my eyes-" She cut herself off, as Sierra had heard a noise. It sounded like heavy footsteps, breaking twigs and sticks as they inched closer to her location. Sierra held her nose up, and the wind carried a scent to her nose. The scent of a human. In a panic, Sierra tripped as she tried to sprint away. She managed to quickly get to her feet and dash away. Once she was far out of range from the human, Sierra caught her breath, and kept on walking like nothing had just happened. She even continued to hum.[\color]
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The rp sample kinda sucks, my brain is mush >|

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@Jessie Dagger: Is it okay if I set you to a rank like scout? Also third person looks like this if you ever forget what it means:
Kennedy Ciaran -insert roleplay sample here-
Katie -insert roleplay sample here-
Kittu - insert roleplay sample here-
In other words, you are accepted! :3

@Kenzi: FUUU- so pretty fox picture... -faints- I like Sierra. I shall add her to the members list. And naw, your rp sample was pretty good. :3

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@Crystal - This is late e.e but I was kinda hoping that I could redo some of my history to make her like..Be a warrior in the clan for like maybe...a month/moon or maybe 2 months/moons? Er.. I forget the name of a 'pack' or group of foxes... Anyway I know it is like a TON to ask... But maybe she will earn it someday... x3 I could start as a warrior... Wait lemme choose in a few minutes.. I have to feed my chickens >(

Edit: Okay fed those darned chickens >:I, anyway what do you think I should do... I have looked at the ranks and I want to be one of these.. But for the life of me.. I don't know which e.e;Warrior 1st choice (most favorite), Guard (not my most favorite x3) and then Hunter (definitely not my most favorite XD) Oh and I was actually role-playing in 3rd person, but I smashed it together because.. That fox is NPC if you want, I will change it to how I really would RP it.. You know what, I'll  just do that now x3
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