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Fall Of The Land [Public] [no download yet] :'(
« on: July 30, 2012, 04:48:18 am »
                                  Fall Of The Land

                                      Welcome, to the second map I've made, and it's my first public one too!
 This land is full of life and death! (mostly death) This wasteland holds no miracles, and no wishes,
  just survival. All who live in this land are just trying to survive, staying with others is your
 best chance for survival out here, but you can still live on your own and survive, many  do it.
 
 
                                                                               Story
 

Humans. They always never know when to quit, what they do effect all those around them. The earth has become so polluted, the humans weren't able to adapt quick enough before the pollution poisoned them. Some animals adapted though, but some areas on the planet were still unlivable, mostly cities. This village was still livable, even with a sky of green and brown.The village's name was Haven. Animals came here to live, they learned each others' languages, and lived here almost peacefully, they still die younger then they should, no one can adapt to the polluted air that quickly. They renamed the village, they called it Haven of ill sky. But this is no perfect haven, many things happened here that no one talks about aloud, only the sky whispers it. The crows hang around areas which are considered dangerous and evil, they'll ward you off with loud caws and sqawks, and if you don't leave that area even after their warnings,they'll attack you.

                                                                    Current Residents
                                                                                                   Grey
                                                                                A siberian husky mix
                                                                              Don't worry he's friendly, he knows his way around since he's lived there
                                                                               all his life.

                                                                                      Wise

                                                                                              An old dog

                                                                         He guards the barn animals. He stays in his dog house watching others
                                                                         from inside. He won't hesitate to rip your guts out if you harm his animals.

                                                                                            Cat of no name

                                                                                                    A cat

                                                                  A mysterious cat who spends most her time in one of the houses.
                                                                   She never speaks so no one knows if she even has a name, they all
                                                                    just end up calling her cat.She also has a kitten. Grey brings her food.

                                                                                                Lil' one

                                                                                                        Kitten

                                                                             Cat's kid, a shy youngster who is always hiding behind her mother and
                                                                              learned to speak by being around Grey, who she loves.

                                                                                                  Crows

                                                                                             All of the crows

                                                                          They always guard places with an evil presence and keep everyone away.
                                                                          They also hang around one tree, where the largest one hangs out at the
                                                                           top.No one knows why they guard those places, or attack when someone
                                                                            comes near. And the only one who lived there that could speak to the
                                                                            crows died so they lay forever shrouded in mystery.


                                                                                    Grey's Tour





   

                                    Hey there! I'm Grey, I'll be your tour guide for today!

     

                                     This is the well, and i- Wait, you're thirsty? Sorry, there's no water in this well.

   

                     Here's some water! Oh, wait, I see a crow, we should go somewhere else to drink.

   

                   Hey, some water! Now yo- Oh, never mind, there's a rabbit drinking there, let's not disturb him.

   

                                      Finally! Some good water, and look, ducks.

   

         Now, since that's out of the way, here's a cave, I usually go here when I want to be alone.

   

               Oh no, this place gives me the creeps, and there's a crow, let's leave.

   

                           That's the sky, I know pretty obvious but I still wanted to show you.

   

             My mom told me that the sky used to be as blue as my eyes, and it looks this way now, because of humans.


   

                                Hi Cat, I'm showing this guy around, I'll bring some fish later, kay'?

   

                                      Hey Lil' One, wanna say hi? Lil' One: ......Hi

         
                   
                               There's the farm, don't tease any of the animals Wise doesn't like it.

   

           This is the barn I sleep here sometimes in the empty stall, the animals seem to not mind it.

   

                                                              These are the cattle

       

                           This is the donkey, he sometimes lays down with me in the empty stall.

       

                                    These are the horses they hate cats, a warning to all felines.

       

                   These are the chickens, they get scared easily, so don't come running to fast towards them.

         

             This is the inside of the chicken coop, most aren't aloud in here, but Wise knew my mother so I'm an exception

         

             This is Wise, he- Wise: Who is this! They smell dangerous! Grey: Don't worry Wise, I'm just giving them a tour.

         

         This is one of the crows, I don't know how to speak to them though, my mom knew how. She told me to stay away
         from places they guard, they never attack me if I go near though, unlike most animals. I still don't go into the
          places their at though.

     

        Now we sh- W-wait i-i-is th-that BLOOD

     

                            We-well th-th-th-that's the end of the t-tour.

                                 TOUR ENDED EARLY



                                           Rules

1. No lions or wolves, only cats and dogs, dogs can be part wolf though, and make your cats smaller, no lion sized cats.
2. Sparkle cats and dogs ARE ALLOWED, just don't make them blinding or have colors that don't go well together.
3. No wings, you can't fly anyways.
4. No mating, or mate begging, that's just freaking creepy, you can kindly ask someone to be your mate, and have pups.
5. No parent begging
6. No harassing others, and if you are harassed don't escalate, inform me, and tell the feralheart staff.
7. No Godmodding, or killing other characters without permission.
8. You can have non-literate rps, but I'd prefer you be literate.
9. No mary sues, no character is "perfect".

                      If you make a character to rp with tell me their breed and bio so I can add them to the residents list.

            I don't have the download up yet, but it will be up soon.

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Re: Fall Of The Land [Public] [no download yet] :'(
« Reply #1 on: July 30, 2012, 05:20:04 am »
Looks good so far :) keep up the good work!

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Re: Fall Of The Land [Public] [no download yet] :'(
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 05:27:49 am »
Thats really awesome. Great maps! Keep it up!


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Re: Fall Of The Land [Public] [no download yet] :'(
« Reply #3 on: August 02, 2012, 02:15:03 am »
and link of Download ?

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Re: Fall Of The Land [Public] [no download yet] :'(
« Reply #4 on: August 02, 2012, 04:09:51 am »
                                                 Fall Of The Land, Sad News


                                                Okay, this sucks, it down right sucks, I can't finish FOTL


                                            Why? Well for some unexplainable reason it won't load in map maker even though other maps
                                            will, and when I tried to go into the map feralheart crashed, so sadly this map won't be finished.
                                           But I'm going show you more screenshots of what it looked like, so make way for....

                                                                 Oak's Tour

         
                                         Hey there, think Grey showed you the whole village?.....

         
                  WHAT!? You really thought he showed you everything?! I should kill you for such insolence!

       
                    Well, then. I guess I shall start this tour, remember that house Grey was afraid of? Let's look inside it.

       
                Of course since the crow's guarding it we have to take a separate entrance.

       
              Hey what's tha- ........ Let's leave.

     
               Check it, it's the crow tree, reeks of decay, I tell ya.

     
              The ol' butcher's place, this was built when the house we were looking at got closed off.

     
                                        Is it me, or did blood just drip on the floor?

     
               Well, would ya look at that! There's still meat here, want some? Hahe just kidding.

     
                  I know you might feel sick from seeing that, so if you think you can hold it, let's go into the next room.

   
         Yep, organs. They still smell edible. Huh, you okay, you look a little green? Right, we should move on.

   
         Ugh, zombies. Hm? Oh yeah zombie apocalypse, no one saw it coming. Only effects dogs though.

   
         Here's a house where you can be safe from the zombies, there's two of these, I'd suggest the other one, though.
                                              The zombie packs are closer to this one.

   
        Graveyard, just graveyard. There's nothing special about, no crows even guard it.

   
       Check this out, Grey showed you the farm, but he didn't show you where the farmer lived.

   
                Okay, now that's just freaky, the hell's wrong with the farmer who lived here?

   
                               Oh.My.Lion. I can see what's wrong with him, he isn't decomposing yet.

   
         This is where they keep the zombies they capture, one of the humans who lived here actually hunted one wa-
            Hm, you wanna know why I said oh my lion? I'll tell you in a bit, it's what they say around here.

   
      Now as I was saying, there was a hunter who lived here and he actually shot one of the zombies and killed it!
                     Isn't that AMAZING!? There's a crow guarding it, so know what that means?

   
                                                            BACK ENTRANCE!

   
                                                                Is that an arm?

   
                                  Well there it is, in all it's dead-undeadness. Let's go before the crow sees us.

   
                                Here's the other place where you can hide from the zombies.

   
          This is the inside, sadly there's no bed like the other one had, but it's farther from the zombies, and it's
                                           near Wise's farm, so you feel extra secure

   
                                           Hey, it's the blood that scared Grey.

   
           Take a good look at what was going to be the future of this small village, they were going to turn it into
                           a town before all the people were poisoned by this noxious air.

   
                                                                            I see a crow~

   
                                                        fehk wis pwaz wout!

     
                                                                                     !

     
                  Hack Cough Cough! Let's not ever do that again.     I wish I could breathe underwater.

     
       This is what created the "oh my lion" thing, there was a cult in this village, they believed in a lion god.
         They believed he had the power to control your fate, sometimes they would sacrifice people.
          ....Wait, is it glowing? Eh, do you hear that chanting? That lion awful chanting?

                                        End Of Tour, Forever

                   Now that you've seen it, let's get back on track. I am working on a new map, a warriors one. This map sadly is gone. But if someone wants to try to make it, I still have the terrain, and you can build it on what you see in these pictures.I am terribly sorry about this, I know how you feel, seeing a map you want to explore never finish makes you want to punch kittens and kick puppies. So bye for now see you in another post when I get close to being done with my warriors map.

                  Karma Out, with a bang