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Poem About Blacki (character)
« on: September 06, 2012, 08:54:26 pm »
I wanted to make a 'herp-derp' poem about my character- Blacki. I like making poems sometimes, soo.. yea :3. I hope you lot like this! It is, of course, from his point of view :3
If you don't understand this poem, or you know me, but had no clue my character had this interest- you should probaly get to roleplay with him more xDD.

NOTE: Please, please, PLEEEASE. Don't steal this Poem and use elsewhere! I worked pretty hard on getting it put together, and I perfer if I wasn't stolen! >_<




Sometimes I tend to sit alone,
Simply watch the stars from the hill or rock I perch upon.
They all remind me of music notes fluttering about,
Or Light houses waving their lights around.

I want to get close towards it, so I can befriend it.
I want to, but I can't.

I can't because they wave their lights too far away.
I can't because they make melodies I can't hear.

I still want to though,
I still want to reach them.

Sometimes I get up, and leave my spot,
So I can go search for a way to reach my music notes and Lighthouses.
I travel across vass land masses in search of the right path.
But I never find it.

That is why I search so little for the path.
That is why I sit upon my rock, star-gazing.

Maybe I could find what I was looking for if I tried harder,
Maybe I could find it if I looked harder.

My eyes tire quickly.
My patience does aswell.

I'm usually ignored and left alone,
So I can gaze at my dreams in peace.
They look so close sometimes,
But they'll always be far away from me.
« Last Edit: September 06, 2012, 11:48:20 pm by -Blacki »

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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 10:59:33 pm »
-Steals and publishes under his name.- xD Just joking. Hurr, Blacki sounds like a charrie that loves to daydream. Nice poem. c:


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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 11:09:48 pm »
Moving this to the poetry section.
Resigned, quit, and basically long gone.

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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 11:10:49 pm »
Beautiful poem~ C: Now I wanna roleplay with you :U

I'm not very good at poems myself, but this is a wonderful poem, Blacki! ^^


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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2012, 11:45:27 pm »
Thanks Teppeh :3. Glad chu liked it!

-Steals and publishes under his name.- xD Just joking. Hurr, Blacki sounds like a charrie that loves to daydream. Nice poem. c:

xDD Well, thank chu Decessei. :3. And yus, Blacki lurves to Daydream!

Moving this to the poetry section.

Thanks for moving it to the right spot Crin x3. I wasn't sure exactly where it should go~ Poems or Characters xDD

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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 12:12:57 am »
xD Mmk. Sounds like a RP with Blacki would be fun.~


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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #6 on: September 08, 2012, 12:56:56 am »
Mhmm! I guess it's fun xDD.

If you ever want to roleplay with me, just Personal Message me whenever I'm online in the game :3.

I'm 'BlackRevenge' =3

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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #7 on: September 08, 2012, 01:05:26 am »
You're welcome~ :3
I'd love to roleplay with you sometime~ c:


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Re: Poem About Blacki (character)
« Reply #8 on: September 08, 2012, 03:20:13 am »
Ooohohohoho. c: Good to know that. -Sends a friend request.-


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