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« Reply #140 on: November 11, 2012, 01:35:41 am »
Alrighty, but I'm going too have Redear lecture Felicier before killing him, like she'd tackle and pin him, then they'd talk, and she'd kill him. After the heat of battle calms, Adderpaw and Foxpaw find out Leopardpaw is missing from the scene, they follow her scent, and find her near doing something they'd disapprove of. And it requires Leopardpaw trying but failing to kill Lionpaw. Her daring Lionpaw to run infront of a monster but the monster misses her or she's rescued by the brothers, Addere and Fox lecture Leopard after making sure Lion was ok, and Lion begins to have mixed feelings of Nightclan and Stormclan, especially when Redear comforts her. Then she becomes fully brainwashed.
And then later down the road, after Lionpaw has been converted to Stormclan's side as a stormclan warrior, Leopardpaw meets her again somehow and tries to convince her to return, that the insident with the thunderpath was an accident, but Lionpaw refuses and has a hint of hostility and soon, as Lion turns and begins to walk away with the "My answer is final" additude, Leopardpaw lunges to attack, then Invidia hears the commotion and goes to investigate, she gets in a battle with Leopardpaw AGAIN!!! Adder and Fox hear the commotion after following Leopard's scent, and confronts the two, and from there we shall see.
Also, Leopardpaw will try to convince Adder, Fox, and Lion that she didn't know and it was just a game, Lion will be stunned from the event but will know Leopard was trying to kill her, and Lion and Adder will be suspicious of Leopard and keep a wary eye on her. And I promise, Wolfy, I'm going to have Redear meat Jagged soon, possibly before the Felicier event hopefully.))

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« Reply #141 on: November 11, 2012, 02:06:17 am »
((@T3R: I don't know when the final battle would come. And I love that plot, lionpaw becomes a brainwashed kitty and redear and facilier have a chat before the "threatening shadow" (facilier) gets killed, *claps in agreement* good plot.

@fused: I remember the plot: three apprentices go out of camp, get discovered by riverstorm then get attacked and all of that jazz. And is it ok if lionpaw has a crush on Q before she gets brainwashed?

@crystal: I'm am very sorry to hear about that, I hope that you feel better. *will roleplay later*))
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« Reply #142 on: November 11, 2012, 03:01:01 am »
(( Yus yus. The plot sounds good to me.  I'll save it on my computer so we don't forget afterwards.
Also, about Ivory killing a cat from Creekclan; she will be reluctant because her choices of victims are (a) her aunt and uncle or (b) her mother and father. Which is kinda twisted. But I have been having this idea for a while now that Ivory resents Songfeather for ignoring the issue with Riverstorm. Just putting it out there. Song probably has a higher probablity of dying than the other three, but I won't say for sure that I'll have her die. Because spoiling that would be ruining the suspense xP
Then again, Rainfrost probably has an even HIGHER chance because Ivory most definitely resents her... Hmm.

So I'll have to ask, Crystal, are you willing to have Mudfur/Stormstripe/Rainfrost die or maybe risk their lives for this plot?

Oh, and as for Lion having a crush on Q, that's all fine and dandy on me, it just depends on how the characters like and interact with eachother~ But Q is a whole nine months older than Lionpaw. He's actually about as old as Riverstorm and Songfeather are. If you want, I can make him a bit younger so it's not as awkward. I'll go as low as 13 moons. Five moon difference~))

Songfeather thought she had seen enough for now, and that the fight was getting a bit too intense for simple training. As she moved to pull the two apart, her ears perked at the sound of a claw embedding itself into flesh. Her eyes widened and she quickly looked to her apprentice, it seemed as if she had blinked one moment and Icepaw was fine, and then the next she opened her eyes and she was wounded. The calico let out a mew of concern and stepped to Icepaw's side, examining the wound over her eye. It looked like a mere scratch, but blood was quickly bubbling out of it. Songfeather frowned, but kept a level head. "Let's get you to Silverheart, alright." Blinking, she remembered that the medicine cat had left not too long ago. Maybe she as back already. "Stripedpaw!" She yowled, jumping ahead toward the medicine cat den. Her daughter's head popped out of the entrance.
"What?" The calico-tabby asked with an edge of annoyance.
Songfeather didn't answer, Silverheart must be back already, there was no other reason for Stripedpaw to be in her den otherwise. "C'mon, Icepaw." She said, touching the tip of her tail to her apprentice's shoulder. "It'll be alright."


Back in the warm comfort of Silverheart's den, Bluebird was curled up next to her brother, her head resting on her paws. Her blue-gray eyes were melancholy, dull in a resigned way. Her breaths were quiet and shallow, her sides barely moving in tune with her breaths. She looked half-asleep, or maybe dead with her eyes open.
Stripedpaw looked on with sympathy, returning from the entrance. She noted how the blue-tabby barely acknowledged her absence, even if it were only for a few heartbeats.
"You should get some sleep. Silverheart'll make sure ol' Jetblack is alright." Her words of comfort when in one ear and out of the other. Bluebird breathed in a breath of herb smothered air and sighed as her only response. Stripedpaw sighed in a similar fashion.
Bluebird closed her eyes and rest her head on Jetblack's back, carefully avoiding the scar marring it. Right. It was so funny that it wasn't, that even though Jetblack should be the one feeling the most pain right now, it seemed as if Bluebird's heart was strung along with his, and she felt every single ounce of pain he did. Maybe it was because up until now, every single hit they took, they had to endure together. Both had to lose their kithood by becoming a warrior prematurely. Both had to lose the parents who had abandoned them here. Through every hardship they only had eachother to cry on, at least Bluebird thought so. And now, Jetblack has went through the pain of losing his sight.
Bluebird felt every ounce of it.

(Alright, enough angsting from Bluebird. xD She's probably the most angsty chara I've rped ever. Not even IVORY is this dramatic LOL)

Foxpaw tilted his head to the side, sending Adderpaw a look of confusement before looking back up at his mentor. "If you're so tired, why dontcha sleep, silly?" He asked, laughing and bounding away through the bushes again. "We can catch some prey all our own. Just leave it to us!" The orange tabby said confidently.

Big, tall ears twitched at the sound of paw steps crunching the snow, the movement flicking away the snow that settled atop his russet red ears. A soft growl banished the dreams inhabiting the young tom's mind, his ever returning consciousness making him aware of a familiar scent. The scent that smelled so much like a certain calico he knew, but he knew better than to think it was her. Heck, maybe it was, considering the foul stench of rotten flesh was invading his nose at the time. The pawsteps stopped, a frigid silence stilling the air. The somali cat stayed rigid as if he were still asleep, trying to make sense of what he was hearing. Seeing wasn't an option, he chose to act asleep to avoid confrontation with the blue-tabby brute. Smelling was useless considering the stench, so he had to figure this out by hearing. Why was Riverstorm here?

The sound of a body colliding with the snowdusted ground, dangerously close to the tom, answered his questions. Another prisoner, he supposed. This clan, from what he had gathered, was not the friendliest. The sound of Riverstorm's heavy pawsteps faded away.

As soon as the 'blue striped brute' as the somali had opted to call him, was out of earshot, a pair of bright eyes slid open from a corner of the rothole. Those eyes were a pale, wide, and inquisitive green. He raised his head off of his paws, his bushy tail thumping the ground once as a way of alerting the other cat to his presence. The tom looked toward the she-cat, who had a mane golden fur, puffy and regal like that of a lion. His pupils dilated and adjusted to the light to get a better look at this cat.
"My, my." He muttered, a smirk pulling at the corners of his maw, "It's not often I see such an embodiment of beauty." The tom pulled himself off the ground and rested himself in a sitting position, inclining his head in what seemed to be a bow of respect. "Ah, pardon my slip of tongue... I am Quintessential. Which is a mouthful, I presume, so please call me Q." Q raised his head, the smirk now evidently playing on his maw. "And what has such a regal she-cat like yourself done to get herself in this hellhole?"


Ivorythorn pulled herself out of the plethora of daunting questions and finally addressed the situation, "I see, so you want me to frame a Creekclan cat of killing another?" She summarized the mission, examining the fish that Lionpaw had brought, sliding it over to her with her paw. "Alright, Sin. I won't disappoint you."
The only question is, who to frame and who to kill? I'll have to be careful, if Creekclan smells Stormclan on the fish it will spell disaster. Then again, it will also have Lionpaw's scent on it. I'll either have to conceal those scents or frame...
Bluebird or Jetblack. I'm fairly sure Sin wouldn't mind as long as it got the job done, but that's not the point... She wants to kill two birds with one stone, but not one of her own. That would be insanity...
She began to think of her choices of victims. Her own family, no less, but... She never really got attached to them. Despite feeling hollow inside at the thought, she could admit that if any of the four died, she wouldn't feel remorse. Ivorythorn might have even been happy. Yes... I... Want to make them suffer like I have, like how Stormclan is suffering. She quickly ruled out Stormstripe and Mudfur, they were the least of her concerns right now. Ivorythorn looked up at the turkish vann, "This is still a plan of vengeance. If I took the easy way out and offed Mudfur and Stormstripe..." Then it won't be worth it. "You want me to kill or frame Rainfrost or Songfeather?" Rainfrost, mother, definitely makes sense. Songfeather, too, because she might prove to be a nuisance if she manages to corrupt Riverstorm or Jetblack or Bluebird. Hmm. I think I'm beginning to get the picture. "Sin..." The silver-tabby nodded, "I understand."
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #143 on: November 11, 2012, 11:55:01 am »
I'm also planning a power of three thing with Dawnpaw, Bluebird, and Jetblack/Eyesore. And they will all die together after going out on an adventure. (Blue and Dawn trying to follow Jet to figure out where he's going and getting killed by either Leopard or Invidia.) This will probably be way up the road, though, like just before or soon after they become warriors
Also, the song isn't by GLaDOS surprisingly, it's a craft by Mayhem "It's Murder"))
After training, when they returned to camp, Leopardpaw had snucken out of the camp immediately. There was no accomplishment but instead she realized the absence of Lionpaw, her becursedly cheerful sister. "Damn it, if I can't keep my pawns in check Ivorythorn will have the upper paw!" She hissed in rage. She was now crossing the border of Stormclan, sitting there in anticipation before bounding forward.
Redear nodded to Invidia, purring pleased at this. She lowered her head to nuzzle the kits cheek and backed away. "I'll need your entry to be first, I'd be noticed and suspicion would dance around me."
He could feel the aura become different as he entered the camp again. The feeling was no longer a dark, thick forest, but now a bright, happy camp with a moisture. He couldn't help a smile at the feel of the camp. The corners of his mouth slightly turned upward, subtly though. Then he felt moss under his paws and Bluebird lay down. He did the same, resting his head on his paws to appear asleep, except for his all-too-perked ears. Then his sister rested her head on his back, which reminded him of his 'birth scar' that he earned when Marrow's underling showed her last ounce of wrath. His growth made it seem smaller, but it grew with him to fit his back perfectly. But the words of Stripedpaw caught his attention. It reminded him of Redear and Riverstorm, but mostly Redear. He hissed to himself at the memory. "Not Jetblack..." He raised his head to look toward the sound direction of the calico. "Eyesore... call me Eyesore, the both of you."
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Name: Eyesore
Gender: Tom
Age: 8 Moons
Personality: Dark, serious, focused, and above all protective of his sister, Bluebird.
History: We all know what happened
Clan: Stormclan
Rank: Warrior
Mate: None
Offspring: None
« Last Edit: November 11, 2012, 01:24:43 pm by T3R3Z1 »

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« Reply #144 on: November 11, 2012, 04:00:05 pm »
Jagged picked up the dead mouse and padded towards the way out of Stormclan hunting grounds. "Lets see if I can terrorize any cats today..." he mumbled under his catch. The tom continued on his way and became wary seeing no stormclan cats had tried to attack him yet, in fact he hadn't seen any at all. Jaggedblade rolled his right eye considering his left wasn't very good anymore. "Looks like Stormclan went off on vacation." he told him-self as the tom reached a good spot he set the prey down and started to eat what he had caught.

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« Reply #145 on: November 11, 2012, 05:20:07 pm »
((crystal, you don't mind if I roleplay frostheart, right?))

back at camp, tinytiger padded over the medicine cat's den, thinking about tonight, the night when she gets her nine lives. I hope that frostheart knows about...getting nine lives..... "Cloudpaw, frostheart, are you here?" maybe they went out collecting-   "I'm here mother" tinytiger turned her head to the left to see Cloudpaw, her soclect printed tail raised. The tiger-striped she-cat sat down in front of Cloudpaw, her tail wrapped around her paws. "hello Cloudpaw" please know about the moonstone Cloudpaw "do you know anything about the moonstone and gaining nine lives from starclan?" I don't think she has the answer.... "well....the moonstone is north of nightclan and........frostheart knows the rest, sorry mother, I haven't learned every single thing about healing and starclan stuff" I was right, I don't think that a appentice knows the answers that I'm seeking for tonight "I know about it's location but thank you" she dipped her head to Cloudpaw before getting up and walked over to frostheart.

as she landed onto the snow-covered ground inside the Rothole, lionpaw sheathed her claws and got up, turning around to see another prisoner. His words confused the young she-cat but lionpaw letted out a sigh and sat down with her bushly tail wrapped around her small paws. "hello Q, I'm lionpaw, former apprentice of nightclan and I got here because....I brought a peace offering here but because I "invalid" their land, I was thrown here" and now joined the clans of cats with single ears and tooth collars "but I did not know that this would happen" she finish her sentence. wait a second....that cat looks just like my father but.....he doesn't have a paw that is paler and he has a black stripe running down his back, not ginger stripes. Maybe I'm going to like him.....
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« Reply #146 on: November 11, 2012, 05:31:00 pm »
I need comfort, like seriously, I experienced the sights of hell... CURSE YOU CREEPYPASTA!!! I'm sticking to PokePasta from now on, and never again shall I watch film versions of pasta. ;w; -Scarred for life- Anywho... in Stormclan territory, Jagged doesn't terrorize Stormclan, Stormclan terrorizes Jagged! >8D))
Redear didn't give Invidia time to answer, she turned back and leaped off into the brush, vanishing within the thicket. The one-eared one was about to figure out what to do with Lionpaw and that annoying rogue, but a new stench caught her attention and it danced around her curiosity. She perked at the stench of the stranger cat. "Appears the intruders will have to wait." She murred to herself before charging forward to confront the stench. A very odd rogue, He wasn't pretty. Pretty or not, the battle-scarred she-cat had no place to talk about looks. She loomed in the bushes as she was getting to the front of this cat before stepping out and standing tall infront of the cat, tail raised in aggression and dominance. "And you are?"

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« Reply #147 on: November 11, 2012, 05:37:15 pm »
((I might have Rainfrost do that, though I'll miss roleplaying her. Yeah, she does kind of need to be put out of her misery, but is it okay if I make her reincarnated into a kit and receives a different warrior name?))

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« Reply #148 on: November 11, 2012, 05:37:32 pm »
((And accepted.))

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« Reply #149 on: November 11, 2012, 06:04:30 pm »
BTW Eyesore's app is to replace Jetblack))

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