|| Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open

[okami129]

-Flails in Vriska's grasp.- Let me at her, I'm gonna cull her! >:U))

[heartsgirl99]

((@T3R: who are you talking about? *is confused*

does anyone want me to find pictures of apprentices as warriors? and I'm planning on Lionpaw to kill her father, maybe because redear sent her a mission to kill or because Lionpaw was in rage and killed him after he says something that he shouldn't say in front of her.))

[wolfgirl56]

((Waht, Batman?))

[NoirBadger]

Swiftleg's body has given into sleep and there he was outside the warrior's den. The black and white tom slept peacefuly. His flank raising slightly as he took in deep breaths. The warrior had no signs of waking up anytime soon.

[Dragonite]

[okami129]

It's not that, It's... voice mimic isn't a skill and seems like a godmod))

[jesija]

((Not to mention Lizardpaw has yet to display any noticeable flaws.
But then again, it wouldn't be possible in Warriors context to have cat ghosts that can fight like tangible beings, correct?... Actually it does make sense, cause it happens in the book xD Nevermind that.
But still, like the situation with Milkfur before, Lizardpaw seems like a Gary-stu.
Since Dragonite is new to this, I think I'll explain. Lizardpaw is too perfect or good at too many things. So far he is apparently a "framing master", can dig like a dog, and can mimic voices. I know you say he is "just an apprentice" but to me that sounds like more of a good thing. Either take away one of the skills and replace it with something practical or give him a few flaws. Normally cats cannot mimic voices or dig feet deep holes in the ground. You don't see Ivorypaw beating down six full-grown warriors in one fell swoop, even though her skill is in fighting.

I will post soon enough -is writers blocked-))

[Dragonite]

[okami129]

-Deep breath- Ahh the smell of a clean font~
But for a newbie, you're not too bad at this. I started out way worse anyway.
And Fused, thanks for explaining. I didn't want another Milkfur in here.
I'll post with Leopardpaw after Ivorythorn's mission so it gives the story slack to follow the characters one at a time))

[jesija]

((*nod nod*
Thanks for fixing it, Dragonite~ Lizardpaw is hilarious xD I be replyin' nao.))

Ivorythorn was beginning to rethink her decision of taking Lizardpaw along. Her ear flicked in silent agreement as he brought a mouthful of mint leaves to the fish. "Agreed; I was worried some cat might smell our scent on it. This should solve-" She paused in her speech, looking on with confused blue-green eyes as Lizardpaw attempted to make the mint leaves stay in place... With his mind. "...Eh?" She blinked, watching him scratch the leaves around angrily with his paws. After a moment, a soft smile bloomed on her face. Ivorythorn bonked the apprentice on the head, but not hard. "Stop acting like a kit, mouse-brain." The words weren't harsh, but fond with amusement. I guess he is still like a kit...

"Ivory," He said, and she blinked at the little "nickname". The silver-tabby was usually referred to as "Invidia" or at least "Ivorythorn". Realizing she was spacing out, she focused back on his words.
"For the first problem, I can drive 'em off with my scary face" He was saying. Ivorythorn had to try her very best not to burst into a fit of giggles as he displayed his best frightening face; which probably wouldn't scare away the most timid of kits.
She shook her head, "Scaring them off won't be necessary. We aren't going to show our faces, and if you end up showing your face, well..." The deity trailed off, assuming he'd know what she meant. "What we'll do is sneak into camp and drop the fish into the fresh kill pile. The scent of the fish will attract whoever comes to it first, so we'll have to time it and simply...Watch. I'll explain more when we get there."

The two were now approaching Creekclan territory, and the sound of water rushing could be heard. The river had thawed faster than she expected... Ivorythorn heard Lizardpaw say something along the line of "I can dig". There was a pregnant pause, and she looked back with curiousity to see what he was up to. He was gone. Blinking, she whipped her head around searching for him and saw him popping up out of the ground. "Whoa-" The apprentice disappeared again, and reappeared at her left. "Hmm...Impressive. We'll use this to our advantage." The silver tabby nodded and hurried across the river, eyes wide open for a good hiding place that gave them a good view of the freshkill pile. Ivorythorn made a point of rubbing her sides against trees and bark to stifle her scent.

((To lazy to do the others. Next post I will xD))