~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real[Put on Hold~]

[catsanddogsandbirds]

Okay, Modus means mode. That with angry and fast means that she get fast angry, you understand? And the red out is like, she transform...like a werewolf, but you cant see it. Then she attack everything and everybody, her friends too. Okay?

Okay. That makes sense.  ))

[pyroraptor1]

I am accept now? Please.

[catsanddogsandbirds]

And why I cant join? I can explain it better now, because Ive got the Google-Translator now.

Hmm...okay. Goggle translate isn't too reliable, but it's good enough. We'll see how it goes))

...so yes, silly. XP))

[pyroraptor1]

Thanks:)

[Dragonite]

Magno struggled to get away from below his friends."Good, good.Now get off me!", said Magno. The dragons got off him."Amen...", said Magno with a high pitched voice.

[pyroraptor1]

Cynder looks arround. She was alone.-very short-

[catsanddogsandbirds]

Magno struggled to get away from below his friends."Good, good.Now get off me!", said Magno. The dragons got off him."Amen...", said Magno with a high pitched voice.

 Lol did you read my post?))

Cynder looks around. She was alone.-very short-

Could you try to stick with past-tense? Example:

Cynder looked around. She was alone.-very short-

))

[Dragonite]

((I did.That was why he said "Good, good". However, he just had seven dragons on top of him, and he couldn't make such a speech.

Anyway, what did you think of my roleplay :3?
PS-Here is the continuation of the post))
Magno seemed surprised."How were you captured then? I know no forest dragon lives around here", said Magno."Anyway, we could free you if ya want", said Magno, looking around for guards. There was one, lightly sleeping."Maxwell, can you put that guard into deep sleep?", asked Magno."I can do even more than that", said Maxwell, smirking and popping out his claws."NO.", said Magno, bonking him on his head."Fine", said the Draco Americanus Icognito and whistled. The guard fell into deep sleep. John silently flew and took his keys. The midgets, with some dificulty, opened the cage.

[catsanddogsandbirds]

OH! I see xDDD))


  Laysa tentatively stepped out of the cage, shuffling awkwardly because of the locked chains connecting her feet and wings together. She shook her head and looked at Magno. She sighed. "The twoleggeds are reaching all of Kirth," she said, hanging her head, "Even the forest. Especially the forest." She looked very sad.

[pyroraptor1]

(Okay, I must a little bit more train to write in Past)