Author Topic: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real[Put on Hold~]  (Read 119812 times)

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #330 on: February 16, 2013, 03:11:31 pm »
Just some tips for English: "agayn" is spelled "again". And when you say "scenes", I think you mean "looks"? ))

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #331 on: February 16, 2013, 03:32:45 pm »
(No, scenes like smell.)

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #332 on: February 16, 2013, 03:45:20 pm »
Oh okay. Please use smell from now on :3 ))

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #333 on: February 16, 2013, 03:51:19 pm »
Okay))

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #334 on: February 16, 2013, 05:08:30 pm »
Maxwell whistled the same song.Bam. Sudden silence."Release the freaking dragon and let's get out", said Maxwell, facepalming. The midgets opened Samala's cage. "Come on. The effects aren't permanent!", said Maxwell. Magno nodded."Go,go,go,go!", said the Knucker.
Nope. Get out. Get. Out. Move ya tail out of my cave. I told you. A million times. And you took it any way. Lemme put it in a way you might understand. THUNDERPUNCH!

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #335 on: February 17, 2013, 03:15:48 pm »
Click. The rusty door to her cell swung open, and vibrated noisily when it banged into the cave. Kurmii gasped,and dashed out, as if she would never get another chance to do so. "Hey look! It's her!" said a dragon(Maxwell). Kurmii looked up to where he was pointing, and noticed a purple-black mountain dragon fiddling with the lock at "Samala's" cave.

The ground vibrated beneath her, and she pressed her ear to the ground. Kurmii gasped. "The twoleggeds are coming!" she roared frantically, and unfolded her wings. She darted up the cave where Samala was sitting and jammed her beak into the lock. Click. The door swung open, and the dragon inside jumped out.


The sun was high in the sky, and the air was filled with bird song. A stream gurgled near-by, and the trees swayed softly in the breeze. Samala lay sprawled out of a rock in the forest, dapples of sunlight covering her ebony coat.

Arlen skipped merrily around her, and doe at her heels. Samala smiled. But she knew it was a dream, and all dreams had an end. In reality, she was locked up in a cage, while her friends searched desperately for her. "Samala? Samala! Samala wake up!" called a voice, and she could feel herself drifting back into reality.


Samala struggled to grab hold of the happy dream, to savor it longer, but she felt a sharp tug on her arm and her eyelids lashed open. The world was slightly blurred, and the wail of sirens cried all around her. "Samala! It's me, Kithea!" said a familiar voice, and Samala jumped up.

"Kithea? Kithea!" Samala exclaimed, and smiled at the sight of her friend. A furry field dragon picked at her lock, and Kithea handed her her book. "You dropped this," she said, and Samala reached for her shoulder to stuff it into her satchel. But it wasn't there.

"The humans took my satchel," she explained, and the lock to her cage clicked. "There," said the field dragon. "Let's get the heck out of here! The guards are coming!" called a voice from below. It's source, a red knucker.

Samala stepped out, but she felt as if she was missing something. What could it be? Then it hit her. Arwen. Kithea started to fly towards the exit, and a few other dragons followed her. She had to act fast. If she told the others about Arwen, they might think she 's a human and reject her. What if they hurt her?

Samala unfolded her wings, and flew up to Arwen's cage. She was crouched in the corner, covering her ears. "Samala, help!" she whimpered, and Samala sunk her teeth into the bars. It was a useless gesture. The bars where made of iron. Second option, unlock the cage. This option turned out successful.

Arwen jumped out, and Samala caught her in her arms. "Hide in my wings," she instructed, and Arwen obeyed. Samala dove down, and followed the others. Gaurs where flooding into the corridor, shouting. The captured dragons roared and growled, trying to escape while they could.

"We need to get out, now!" Roared the knucker, and pointed to a hole. Samala squeezed through tenderly, trying not to smush Arwen. At least the other's couldn't see the elf wrapped in her wings.

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #336 on: February 17, 2013, 03:35:19 pm »
Bailey jumped as the dragons rushed out in a flurry. She saw three new dragons: a green, scaly female, a brown, feathered female, and a cat-like female. All females. She chuckled. Suddenly, however, she realized that guards were surrounding them. She and the bigger dragons(Maxwell, Grukem, Kurith, and Kithea)surrounded a circle around the smaller ones. Maxwell seemed to exhausted to just make them fall asleep, and all he could do was roar. However, bailey, Kurith, and Kithea could use their powers.

"We've got them," Kurith growled, narrowing his eyes. He glanced at Kithea, who was taking unnaturally deep breaths. Her pupils were so small you could hardly see them. Then, she was still. Kithea nodded to Kurith. The guards were closing in around them.
 Kurith blew some misty air. The guards stared at it, confused. It slowly drifted to one guard, tickling its face. The human jumped back. Kurith smirked and the misty suddenly lashed out, turning into water. He created a rope of water, holding the guards together. They squirmed and kicked, yelling out.


  Kithea stared at the water. She opened her mouth and BAM!

 A flash of silent, brilliant light. It exploded in the air, the bolt of lightning traveling through the water and frying the guards. She sighed and turned to them.
 "That'll hold the other guards off for a while," she said, panting ferociously, "But we should hurry." She grabbed a midget dragon, knowing that they couldn't fly as fast. Kurith grabbed the rest of the midgets, and Bailey carried Magno.
 "Can you fly?" Kithea asked Samala. Her wings looked a little bruised and battered, and one had a strange lump (Arwen) but she seemed okay.

  Bailey took off, followed by the rest of the dragons. As she looked back, she saw the shape of a small girl in the middle of the town, staring at them with awe and confusion.

 Elizabeth.

 She gasped and roared a slight flame to show Elizabeth it was her. The other dragons stare at her. "Elizabeth," Bailey sgihed, looking at the ground, "I'm sorry." She took off again, ignoring the "Who was that?"'s.

 Elizabeth knew the truth about the Main Camp, and for some reason, Bailey felt it was a bad thing that was her fault. She couldn't escape the feeling.

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #337 on: February 17, 2013, 04:46:46 pm »
Nope. Get out. Get. Out. Move ya tail out of my cave. I told you. A million times. And you took it any way. Lemme put it in a way you might understand. THUNDERPUNCH!

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #338 on: February 17, 2013, 06:17:53 pm »
Meep. What just happened? Because of Magno saying he could only slash...Maxwell got angry and his heart skipped a beat? What...?))

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Re: ~Dragons of Kirth~ [Literate and Semi-Real--OPEN AND ACCEPTING~]
« Reply #339 on: February 17, 2013, 09:19:26 pm »
((Remember the scene that Maxwell tried to kill Bailey, and Magno dug his claws deep into Maxwell's heart? Well, Magno said he can only slash, and Maxwell was angry that now, because of Magno's slashing, he has heart attacks every 10 beats.))
Nope. Get out. Get. Out. Move ya tail out of my cave. I told you. A million times. And you took it any way. Lemme put it in a way you might understand. THUNDERPUNCH!