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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #20 on: August 17, 2013, 06:36:40 pm »
You misspelled "escape" with "escope". (Literally all I know is misspelled...)

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #21 on: August 17, 2013, 06:46:31 pm »
You spelled "actions" wrong.

"Can you image what Thankgiving would be without turkey? As native to the Unites States as the holiday itself, turkeys have wandered the Americas for ten million years."


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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #22 on: August 17, 2013, 06:51:50 pm »
You added an extra "S" to America. :3

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #23 on: August 17, 2013, 06:58:17 pm »
Ahh, no. I spelled "Thanksgiving" wrong. xD

"But what about those strange bleck holes?"

You spelled "black" wrong. Just a random question, was this taken out of a story?


Wild or domesticated, the turkey was so important in the early days of the United States that Ben Franklin wanted to make it the official United States bird. When the bald eagle was chosen instead, he said, "I wish the bald eagle had not been chosen...He is a bird of bad moral character...The turkey is much more respecteble bird and withal a true original native of America."

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #24 on: August 17, 2013, 07:07:16 pm »
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #25 on: August 17, 2013, 08:23:47 pm »
Eman, there is no winning. This is just for fun. :/

Also, no, it wasn't taken out of a story. I just imagine one of my characters describing these sentences. Such as Havor describing the first line I made, and Rezcu describing the second line.
Meep. I think you also misspelled "Respectable" too.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #26 on: August 17, 2013, 08:27:19 pm »
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.
Urrrr....you can't win. This is a game, not a contest.....



You miss spelt 'This'.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #27 on: August 17, 2013, 08:34:30 pm »
I never thought I would fall in love with someone. But I did. I fall in love with him. He's the only one for me.

You put "fall" instead of "fell".

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Also, no, it wasn't taken out of a story. I just imagine one of my characters describing these sentences. Such as Havor describing the first line I made, and Rezcu describing the second line.
Meep. I think you also misspelled "Respectable" too.

Oh, okay. But well written anyway, floof. And yes, I spelled "respectable" wrong.

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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #28 on: August 17, 2013, 10:39:59 pm »
Ignore this post, it was glitched .-.



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Re: Spot the mistake!
« Reply #29 on: August 18, 2013, 09:12:57 am »
You all failed and i win. XD i forgot the ( &) when i said that this was true. YAAAAY I WON.
I'm sorry to say, eman, but you did not win. I'm going to choose a winner every month or so that has made the most detailed and hardest to spot mistake. I'm sorry but yours wasn't the most detailed. From now on, I ask you to leave the winning up to me, okay?  

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"Think your school exams are tough? Hate those pop quizzes? Just imagine what scholars in ancient China had to go through if they hoped to reach the high position of "mandaren," an officer of the vast Chinese empire."
You spelt mandaren wrong? Isn't it spelt mandarin? *shrugs*

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