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Skinless (a short story) (UPDATED: 9/25/2013)
« on: August 29, 2013, 02:41:05 pm »
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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #1 on: August 29, 2013, 02:44:41 pm »
o.o You are a good artist & a good writer x3 Good job on it - can't wait for the next part :D

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #2 on: August 29, 2013, 04:30:27 pm »
Awwhh, thanks, floofy floof. c:

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2013, 05:09:01 pm »
Aw cliffhanger v.v I loved it thought so far.
I Lmfaod so hard at the onion part. xD I can totally sympathize with that hatred.
You purposely making your character 'unlikable' is working reverse psychology on me. lol

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #4 on: August 29, 2013, 05:50:28 pm »
Thanks haha! XD Well, some people hated my character, and others liked it. I guess everyone's different. :3

I actually have most of the short story completed. I just decided to release a bit at a time for (hopefully) better criticism.


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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #5 on: August 29, 2013, 05:59:59 pm »
Lol yep. Cause most people are used to seeing that character that has a bad past, is always alone and sad, 'nice', etc etc. Idk It may be also because I just like rude characters xD

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« Reply #6 on: August 29, 2013, 07:24:33 pm »
Lol yep. Cause most people are used to seeing that character that has a bad past, is always alone and sad, 'nice', etc etc. Idk It may be also because I just like rude characters xD
I agree with you... "nice", "gentle", or "selfless" people (in stories) are too mainstream. x3

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #7 on: August 29, 2013, 07:58:22 pm »
I agree with you, OreoHeroz. Because of that, I'm currently working on a story where every single character is unlikable, from the mother who throws temper tantrums down to the hobo who sells potatoes for a living. I might post it, but I'm not sure. I don't want anyone stealing it o.o

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #8 on: August 29, 2013, 08:01:56 pm »
I would love to see your new story, but you are correct that people might claim your story as theirs. Otherwise, I'd suggest you keep that new story to yourself (?) until you feel comfortable with sharing it.

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Re: Skinless (a short story)
« Reply #9 on: August 29, 2013, 11:51:22 pm »
I'm currently working on a story where every single character is unlikable, from the mother who throws temper tantrums down to the hobo who sells potatoes for a living.

XDD That's awesome! I wish hobos would sell me potatoes!

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