Author Topic: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (Finished! You may read!)  (Read 2088 times)

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The Rise of Paul


Chapter 1 The Runaway

I woke up as usually tired, hungry and lazy.
I stood up, as my coloar ranged.
It kinda angered me, standing up I stretched my body as I yawned.
Hearing my name as my owner called me.
Running I saw a bowl of kittypet food.
Walking closer to the bowl I leaned down to begin and eat it.
My owner pated me, before it left a window open for me to go out and in, as soon as the owner left, I drinked some water, before I stood up and licked my tiny gray maw.
I turned to the window as I walked closr, crouching I soon leaped up near the window, before I went out.
Leaping down, I walked near the fence as I looked up and jumped up on it.
Hearing my name again, I turned as I saw Jordan, a kittypet too.
"Hey Paul!" She greeted me, as I responded. "Hey Jordan, what are you doing here? Shoulden't you be at the nest, taking care of you're kits?" I asked as Jordan sat down and spoke. "There asleep now, but hey I need my own time too you know." She gigelled, before she spked again. "So, is your owner out again?" Jordan asked, as I answered. "Yes. Like always." I turned my head towards the forest as I asked. "Do you think forest cats exist?"
I turned back as Jordan spoked. "You know there dangerouse. I once-" She was cut out as Paul spoke. "Again?" He turned back as he leaped down into the forest way. "Paul, come back here!" She spoke loudly.
"I'm just going to go and look... If I wont come back, this is a goodbye." Paul, spoked seriousely, as Jordan sight, before she jumped off of the fence and walked to her kits.


Chapter 2 Danger Lurks

Entering the dark forest, Paul looked around.
Seeing a mouse, Paul straled to his hunting mode, and crouched closer and closer.
Being near the bush, he soon setteled down, as he soon stretched his hind-legs and jumped true the bush.
Nicely catching the mouse, Paul soon heard a strich under other bushes.
Then another, and everywhere.
Paul, placed the mouse down, before he could look up, someone attacked him, as Paul hissed.
Hissing, he had to fight another cat.

{"Is it a forest cat?"}
Paul, thought for a moment.
While thinking the cat clawed his back-fur as it made Paul hiss.
Turning, he attempted to pin the cat down.
If a succsess he would place his paw by the cats neck.
And it truly was a succsess.
The cat, soon spoke up.

"Hey, take it easy."
The cat gave a chucale.
"Nice moves by the way."
The cat added, as Paul spoke.
"Who are you? And why did you attacked me?"
Paul, questioned, before the cat answered.
"I'm Stonepaw. And by now, I think you attacked me."
Stonepaw chucaled again.
"May I ask? Who are you? And could you get off of me?"
Stonepaw questioned, before he asked if he could get off.
Paul, stood up, as he walked off, soon sitting down as he spoke.

"My name is Paul. I'm a kittypet. And may I ask you? Why such a funny name? Stonepaw. Pff."
Paul, huffed. As Stonepaw spoke.
"I'm a clan cat. I'm an apprentice. My mentor is Gingerfur, the clan's deputy. Cool, huh?"
Stonepaw asked. Paul, was now confused. A clan cat? deputy? What was it?
{"Huh, I thought forest cats were..... loners or something like that."}
Paul, soon spoked up. "What is an apprentice? Mentor,deputy and clan?"
Paul, questioned. He did not knew what the it was, as he awaited for answer.
But before Stonepaw, could answer, another cat lurked in, as Stonepaw bowed in respect and spoked.

"Greetings, Ashstar."
Paul, was now totally confused. Who was 'Ashstar'?
Soon the dark gray tom spoked.

"Stonepaw, may I ask? Why are you not hunting but talking with a kittypet?"
Ashstar, now questioned, as he turned to Stonepaw.
"Well, I was hunting, but then Paul-"
Stonepaw, was paused by another cat.
"Stonepaw, do you know that you are not allowed to talk with kittypets?"
Stonepaw, looked up.
"Liontail, I, I didn't ment to, I just saw him catch a mouse, so I attacked him, but he fought back, he didn't ran like any other kittypet, I know..."
Paul, sat down, as Ashstar asked.
"So, Paul, you fought back? Eh? Why are you here?"
Paul, gazed up, before he heard Ashstar, spoke. Soon Paul, answered.
"I just waned to know that forest cats exist... That's all."
Paul, explained, before Liontail spoke up with a hiss.
"Now you know, were real, now get out of our territory!"
Ashstar, turned back.
"Liontail, leave now!"
Ashstar, ordered, as Liontail, turned and walked away. Soon, Ashstar, turned back to Paul, as he stood up, and walked closer, before he asked.
"Tell me Paul. Are you tired of your kittypet life?"
Paul, stood up, as he spoke up bravely.
"I sure am. There's nothing goodiew good to do, just lay around and stuff, that's just boring, I want action!"
Paul, explained, before Ashstar asked.
"Tell me. Do you wish to join SmallClan?"
Paul, eyes widen out.
"I would gladly join."
Paul, spoke, as Ashstar spoke up.
"Then, let it be. Welcome to SmallClan."
{"WOW! I'm a forest cat now!"}

Chapter 3 The Welcoming

The tom soon entered the SmallClan's camp as he walked where the leader went, but soon stopted sitting down as he awaited for something.
"All cats old enough to catch there own prey, gather around the small-rock."
The leader exclaimed as all cats started to gather.
"Today, we have a new member amongs us. Yes I know that he is a kittypet, but give him a chance, unless you want to take it on me."
The tom snorted as he looked at Paul.
"Paul, from now on until you reach your warrior name, you will be knowen as Bluepaw."
The tom meowed soon after looking for the right warrior to mentor Bluepaw.
"Bluepaw, your mentor shall be Foxclaw."
The tom ended soon after speaking.
"Clan meeting dissmisst."
The tom jumped off as he walked to his den.
Paul, already had his colar off his neck, as Stonepaw accured near Paul.

"Hey Bluepaw!"
Paul, turned seeing Stonepaw as the tom soon spoke up.
"Hey Stonepaw!
The tom's soon began a conversation.


Chapter 4 The Training Begins

Paul..... I mean Bluepaw had awoken from a nuge as he soon saw a large tom standing near him.
It was Foxclaw.

"Bluepaw. Get up! You're training is about to start!"
The tom spoke up with a low hiss as he trotted out of the den.
Bluepaw, haven't hessitated and followed his mentor.
Arriving at the training hall, the tom sat down as he watched his apprentice and spoke up.

"Bluepaw.... Show me you're hunting stance!"
The tom ordered as Bluepaw stood in his hunting stance.
Soon Foxclaw was impressed.
Bluepaw turned and asked.

"Anything else?"
Bluepaw asked.
"Nothing! Lets get back to camp!"
The tom spoke up.
"Shouldn't we hunt for prey or something?"
Bluepaw asked as Foxclaw turned and gave a gaze of a rage.
Bluepaw huffed as he soon followed his mentor back to camp.



Chapter 5 "You will die!"

Bluepaw stopted near the camp, but not to near it.
Bluepaw turned to Foxclaw and spoke up.

"You think you're noble? You think you're smart? You think you're swift? You think you're strong? You think you're the right one to be the deputy? I have been watching you lately.
Now I know. You will die! But soon."

Bluepaw spoke up, as he passed true Foxclaw.
Foxclaw now stood there speachless. How did that apprentice knew that Foxclaw wanted to be a deputy?
From where he heard his secret?
He never told anyone about it, nor he mentioned anything about it.
Foxclaw now started walking, before he heard a hiss.
Turning around, he saw a badger.

"...."
Foxclaw, stood there speachless. If he'll run, he'll die, if he'll fight he'll die.
Foxclaw placed his paw near his othefr paw, as the badger jumped at the tom, scarching it's face.
Bluepaw was already in camp getting some prey to eat.
Bluepaw, didn't cared about anything, he walked near a shrub and started eating.
Foxclaw, was soon to die, as the badger walked closer.
Foxclaw coulden't yell for help, as he lost a lot of blood and was to weak.
The badger hissed again and slashed Foxclaw's trougth.
Now Foxclaw lyied there dead without any life movements.
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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
« Reply #1 on: January 31, 2014, 04:03:13 pm »
I like it so far! Keep going!

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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2014, 04:17:57 pm »
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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
« Reply #3 on: February 01, 2014, 11:02:39 am »
Updated~
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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
« Reply #4 on: March 08, 2014, 07:21:30 am »
Updated again~

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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
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Re: {The Rise of Paul} :Warrior FanFiction: |1,2,3,4 & 5| (WIP)
« Reply #6 on: March 16, 2014, 09:21:05 am »
I love where this is going!
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« Reply #7 on: March 16, 2014, 07:12:50 pm »
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« Reply #8 on: March 27, 2014, 01:44:20 pm »
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Updated~ You may read now the full 5 chapters!~
I will add other chapters in a new thread later on!~

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