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Agony
« on: April 05, 2014, 03:28:30 am »
No one really knows where Agony came from, but it is said that all the pain and anguish formed a single entity, and that being was Agony. Anyone who has ever heard a whisper of this monster fears his destructive force, you see when he gets angry, or feels pain anything around him becomes his deadly tool. He uses his blood as a whip, and uses them to reach trees, and if he isn't bleeding, he can unleash a mail-storm, a destructive bass filled sub-sonic sound that destroys whole forests within a square mile. But Agony is actually a kind hearted creature, he hates the fight, but cannot control his powers, he has a split personality, and when threatened, it completely takes over, and will slaughter anything in his path. He is completely broken, he is scared of himself and others, but there is one who he trusts with all his soul, his polar opposite, Guardian who protects him when ever he can.

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Re: Agony
« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2014, 07:51:11 am »
Very Nice.
You sure are very talanted on telling stories or writing plots about the characters.
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Re: Agony
« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2014, 03:14:30 pm »
I completely agree with TinyTail.
Lovely ! <3
Incredible.
I hope to see more stories from you etc.
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Re: Agony
« Reply #3 on: April 06, 2014, 03:15:22 pm »
This is beautiful...

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Re: Agony
« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2014, 07:42:41 pm »
Thank you all so much, your support is what keeps me writing, i love you all! ^_^ and here is a link to one of my characters stories http://www.feral-heart.com/index.php?option=com_jfusion&Itemid=2&jfile=index.php&topic=44465.0