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Thoughts?
« on: April 30, 2014, 12:24:09 am »
Hi guys! I drew this wolf last night. What do you guys think? Critiquing would be awesome!
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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #1 on: April 30, 2014, 12:31:04 am »
It's a great drawing. I love it ^^

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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #2 on: April 30, 2014, 12:32:19 am »
Btw guys, the initials at the bottom, really stand for Awesome Person XD jk

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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #3 on: April 30, 2014, 12:51:57 am »
It's a rather nice piece, Ms. Shadow. I have to say that I don't see that much of a flaw. Ye' seem to have a natural, cartoon-ish technique when it comes to drawin' and ye' did a job well done with the wolf's anatomy. I also like how ye' added the bandanna around his/her eyes.
With a bit more practice, I can tell ye're gonna only improve as time rolls on. Keep it up.
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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #4 on: April 30, 2014, 12:53:27 am »
I think its luffly! I like the way you did the fur, and the muzzle/head shape is purrrfect :3

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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #5 on: April 30, 2014, 12:58:33 am »
I think its a bit rough because i didnt clean up the edges. But im glad you guys like it! I didnt spend all that much time on it near the end cuz i was tired XD

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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2014, 01:01:04 am »
I think this is a wonderful piece of art, floof!
I actually like the sketchiness to it with the lines and whatnot- great job on the shading, too, by the way!
I look forward to seein' more from you!
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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #7 on: April 30, 2014, 01:28:36 am »
WOW. This is really good. I like the way you shaded on the corners of the fur pattern/texture you put in, it really makes it look 3D, and less like a flat color. To make it look more neat, i would recommend erasing the lines that are not straight and the ones that do not just outline the drawing. (ie. the lines at the bottom of the picture make it look messy). I would also recommend taking your time and going slowly with the shading because, if you take your hand of the (mouse?) or pick up your pen, your shading colors will be different (I dont know if that makes any sense?). To draw my pictures i use an application called "Artrange Studios" which is free. I would STRONGLY recommend downloading it and if you have any trouble you can contact be on DA for questions about how to work it but overall it is pretty simple and easy to use. :) This drawing of yours is my favorite out of all the ones I have seen so far :) Keep up the good work +floof
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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #8 on: April 30, 2014, 01:51:41 am »
I think this is a beautiful piece! Keep up the great work.

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Re: Thoughts?
« Reply #9 on: April 30, 2014, 02:01:00 am »
Ok, i use my tablet and the screen is a bit bad so some of the lines get messed up.