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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #400 on: September 22, 2014, 07:48:20 pm »
What about trying to get Firestripe back for leaving?
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I needed to get Darkstar alone in his den.

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Bluekit was looking at me suspiciously. So we're bluepelt's kits. Why are none of them playing, or being nice to me? They only played together, without me. I sat at the entrance and waited for my mom to come back from this, this meeting. Or whatever. There was a strange feeling in me, almost as if star clan were trying to speak with me. I fell asleep and went into a dream. I was running through the forest with Silvermoon. Except I was a warrior. I looked behind me, there was broken clan. I looked up seeing silverpelt shining. We skidded to a halt. Turned around to look at them. We ran after them. I woke up, I knew it was special. I had to remember it. But there was no sound, or words. All I have to do is remember it.

Goldentail (btw he is all white with an orange tail tip that fades into white halfway up. His right paw and left ear are the same but don't fade and his ear doesn't show it much. His paw is only the paw. He also has a light gray, small faded stripe on the long way of his back, sorry this part was so long)
I saw commotion going on in the cat camp. I decided to go, even though it might not be the perfect time. But what did I know? I'm a loner. I went down the slope to the camp entrance. I walked in slowly as the cats were starting to break up. Then I noticed the white and ginger spotted she again, we made eye contact. She trotted over to me. "What are you doing here?? You left me when I had my kits." I starred at her in surprise. How does she remember? "Yes, Goldentail. I remember. A she-cat never forgets their mates, especially when they steel their kit and run off with it." She was saying it loud enough for the cats who were gathered around to hear. They started coming back. "Tell me, where did my blue kit go? Where did Icekit go?" I looked into her eyes, dumbfounded. I blinked and looked away. "I took her to a small den, and raised her." I tried to remember what the invisible star clan cat told me. "I decided to name her Deadkit, I don't know why." "She was a beautiful kit, why did you take her?" I closed my eyes. "I didn't want to have kits, I never told you." "Obviously." I opened my eyes, not surprised she was mad and didn't like me. "I trained her for 4 moons, I think it was. Then after I thought she was ready, I made her a warrior." "What did you call her? I would have named her Icetail." I looked down in shame. "I called her Deadheart." "Why such a terrible name." "BECAUSE I DID, Kaiheart, because I did." I turned around to walk out, I had one paw lifted. "I was going to join back, but I guess I'm not." Then I saw a dark gray apprentice come bounding over. "Mom, who is this?" Kaiheart licked her. "This is a terrible Tom, I wish he wasn't like this. I'm sorry Ashpaw, he is your father." She looked surprised, then sad. But of course, I knew. I was a terrible father, I shouldn't have left, I should've stayed, and help care for them, even if I didn't want kits. "Are you really?" "Yes, um, Ashpaw. I am" her tail dropped down. "Oh, ok. I-I have to go, now." She ran off. "You made your own kit leave, how does it make you feel, huh?" I slowly started walking away. "Terrible, very bad. Goodbye Kaiheart." I slowly walked towards the entrance when I saw their leader by his nest.

So sorry it was so long. I didn't think it would be this long in my head, but it happens. If he is accepted into the clan is Darkstar/Duna's choice.
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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #401 on: September 25, 2014, 01:17:47 am »
I'm still waiting for Darkstar to respond to Spotteddots lol))


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« Reply #402 on: September 25, 2014, 11:20:35 am »
Darkstar looked at her, "No, you shouldn't go. He is just getting used to it, he has been without a mother for a long time, it shocked him seeing his mother was kind of a shocker. Just give him some space, he will come back soon." Darkstar smiled at her. "He's glad your home, he just needs to get used to having you back."

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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #403 on: September 26, 2014, 09:19:03 am »
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The tom nodded. "Al'right then. Let's go." The tom spoke up.
Standing up, he walked away with Wishdawn to talk.

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« Reply #404 on: September 26, 2014, 08:11:42 pm »
Wishdawn followed him away alone. When they were alone she sat infront of him, gathering up her courage. "Silvermoon.." She started at her paws for a moment then looked him in the eyes, "Ever since I first meant you.. I.. I have always had a crush on you." Wishdawn felt her skin heating up, but she looked him in the eyes.

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Re: TSS | The Seven Stars | [Remake!] | {Open and Accepting!}
« Reply #405 on: September 26, 2014, 09:03:33 pm »
(Duna? Could Darkstar come out to see Goldentail?)
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I started walking to the fresh kill pile, then a white male with gold spots and a gray stripe. He started arguing with Kaiheart. I gasped, so this is her mate, what happened to him. He was all scraggly. His fur all spiked, because he didn't clean it. Then they were talking about a second kit. I didn't know she had two kits, is it icefur. I only guessed icefur because she said icekit. then they were yelling, many cats came to see what is happening. Then he said who the kit really was. so he named her Deadheart. How nice. That must stink for Kaiheart, losing her kit. To bad I can't stay. I walked back to the nursery, sharing a rabbit with Bluepelt.
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« Reply #406 on: September 27, 2014, 12:33:47 am »
(Sure)

Darkstar left his den, and saw Kaiheart with a Tom. He was unfamiliar, so Darkstar walked over, "Kaiheart. Who is this?" He was looking straight at the male (Goldentail), with slight suspension in his eyes.

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« Reply #407 on: September 27, 2014, 01:35:04 am »
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"This," I bared my teeth, and growled. "Is the Tom who betrayed me, Ashpaw and Icekit." I saw Darkstar still confused. "Or as he called Icekit, Deadkit, then Deadheart (lol I forgot the n in then. So it looked like: Deadkit, the Deadheart). After all this, he dared to step paw back in the clan. Oh no, not while I, or Ashpaw are living." I saw Ashpaw look down. She sat next to me. "I always wanted to meet my father, but now I know it's a huge mistake." She walked back to the apprentice den. "Goldentail, you betrayed me, and your own kit. You even killed the other." I heard gasps of new cats who just joined. "That's right. You know how I lost my blue kit, Icekit?" I heard murmurs. "This is what took her, I never told the clan because I was too sad, I forgot about it. And so did you. Then he dared to step paw in camp."

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"Fine, if I'm not welcome. I will just leave." I turned to walk away.
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« Reply #408 on: September 27, 2014, 09:13:02 am »
Wolfheart:
He pricked his ears to stalk hear the conversation. Wolfheart wasn't surprised.

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« Reply #409 on: September 27, 2014, 11:20:10 am »
(Lol Wolfheart the stalker XD)

Darkstar looked at Goldentail, then back to Kaiheart, "Did he really do all that?" If this cat abandoned his mate when she needed him most, then ran off with one kit, gave it a horrid name, Dead, then killed it a few moons later, Darkstar didn't exactly want this cat in his clan. He watched as Goldentail left.