Ahh, this looks great! c:
The only feedback what can be improved is around the ankles, trying to smudge it out and adjust the colour so it doesn't cut off too much. I know the models are an issue in general when it comes to this, but there are ways to make them a little less visible.
Also the eyelid, unless you want them to be that orange, they look like the default eyelids.
Changing the colours of those is on the eye file, on the right side of the eyeball. (Top right corner.)
Selecting the area and colouring the way you want it to be is usually a very quick and easy way to change it.
