Dogs of Hunger City (please do not post here!)

[courtneyrc]

Tearless mind sending me a friend request in-game so I know when the pack is rping? My username is courtneyrc. Thanks!

[Tearless]

Courtney: Sure thing, as soon as I can get onto the server again (been having problems today).

Toroto: I can understand what's happening, but the sentences are a little gramatically odd, mostly just the first two. For instance, the first sentence could be "The light of the moon shone in her eyes in the dead of night."

[Toroto]

Ok I edited the first two sentences.

[Whitefangkiba]

Hm I waited today in map for the rp but no one else showed up 8D ( not sure if you were having server errors or not) Maybe you could add me aswell in game? Might be easier to catch eachother online^^
WhiteFangKiba

[Tearless]

I'm really sorry about that; there were IRL familial issues going on (all's well now). I'll add you next time I'm on.

[Asheyx]

This sounds really interesting, I'd love to join :3

Pack: The First
Name: Pepe
Age: 3 human years
Gender: Male
Breed: Beagle
Personality: Pepe is stubborn and headstrong and doesn't like to be ordered around. Once he made a descision, it's hard to change his opinion about it. But he is also very protective towards those he likes and would fight for them even at the cost of his life.
Strengths: He has a very good nose and strong legs that allow him to run very fast.
Weaknesses: He is afraid of water, because he was thrown into a deep lake by his old owner when he was still a little pup.
Anything else: At the age of 1 human year he ran away from his owner because Pepe didn't want to live with him anymore. Since then he lived on the streets.
Pic:
Preset download: Clicky~
RP sample: Pepe walked through the streets and everything seemed to be alright. He let the scents of the city drift into his nose: Dog. And Human. And they were together. "Probably one of these dogs that live with them in a house", he thought, remembering his time with his former and brutal owner. Suddenly he heard a loud yowl coming from where he had smelled the two.  He headed into the direction and saw a child throwing stones and a little pup. Automatically he thought about how he had suffered when he got punished and without thinking he flung himself against the child, baring his teeth in a deep and angry growl. The human let out a shocked scream and ran away. Pepe turned to the fridgened pup. "Come on, I'll take you to a save and warm place where you can rest and eat. Just follow me, little one", he said gently an headed for his home.
DEADPOOL

[Tearless]

You're missing something from your post, check the rules and you'll need to PM me an rp sample (doesn't have to be long or uber-descriptive, I'm just looking for grammar and spelling).

[Asheyx]

Oh sorry, I forgot about those things ^^ I edited my post, hope it's ok that way.

[Tearless]

No worries Looking good; go ahead and sign up on the website and I'll add you next time we're both on.

[Asheyx]

Alright. I'll send you a friend request, so we can find each other