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« Reply #70 on: October 20, 2012, 12:41:31 am »
Dawnpaw looked up at Silverheart, her mentor and groaned. Why couldn't she sleep a few extra hours or minutes? "Coming, Silverheart," Dawnpaw said, slowly getting up, hearing some of her bones crunch from the sudden movement. She walked slowly into the medicine cat's den and stared down at the juniper berries.
Icepaw radiated a teasing look towards Brackenpaw, causing him to widen his eyes. "Hmm, maybe we do this?" She tackled Brackenpaw and made growling noises, trying to nip at his ears.
Brackenpaw whimpered as Icepaw tackled him, trying to bite at his ears, or maybe worse, his neck! He squealed in fear and tried to kick Icepaw off. Successfully, he wiggled out of her grasp, and then turned to face Icepaw, his tail high in the air.

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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #71 on: October 20, 2012, 01:48:43 am »
((lol, fireblaze, oak and facilier are short-haired cats. When okami posts leopardpaw then I'll roleplay tinytiger since tinytiger is leopardpaw's mentor. I'm planning to make silverheart have back problems due to being attacked by facilier twice.))

"hello Dawnpaw, sorry to wake you up but you will need to learn. You can go get fresh-kill after training but it won't be long, hopefully. See these juniper berries? It's used to soothes belly aches, gives cat some strength, helps cats with trouble breathing and helps cats to calm down" silverheart meowed, her paw pointing to the blue berries in front of her.

now outside of camp, lionpaw could see that her father was shivering by the cold brezze. only if dad had longer, thicker fur like a nightclan cat then he won't be freezing to death as much she thought. As they head towards the river, the golden apprentice walked closer to her mentor, her thick fur touching the short orange fur. "lionpaw, we are going to fish, we may be nightclan but you were born with paws of a-" "fishing? Isn't that creekclan's job to do?" she meowed, her blue eyes widen with confusion. She could see the river that seprates nightclan from creekclan, the sound of the small waves from the river made her ears pinned. what if we get into the river and get into creekclan's territory? she thought. Her father hasn't answered her question but when she was about to speak, her father lowered his head into the rushing river, his paw touching the water. Quick as a flash, her father swiped his unsheathed paw into the water and then quickly lifted his paw out of the water with a silver fish caught in his claws. He placed the fish on land and lowered his head to bite the back of the neck, ending the prey's life. "wow, you caught a fish, can I try?" she meowed to her mentor. "sure but all of your paws must be unsheathed, it's best if you try to warm up first so you have less chances of dying if you fall into the water" lionpaw obeyed and sat next to her father, her thick fur touching the deputy's fur and ignoring the smell of the fish that her father caught. ((who is roleplaying frostheart?))
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #72 on: October 20, 2012, 02:39:06 am »
Focusing on her mates words, she was surprised when a paw cuffed her ear. Oddly enough, it reminded her of kithood days and made her wish they were brighter. She probably wouldn't have turned out like this if it was just for 2 simple words from a cat long dead now. "I'm sorry..." A sand-paper tongue had broken her thoughts as it stroked her head. In reply, Redear pressed her head against Riverstorm's chest and purred, but still seemed depressed all the same. "I hate them so..." Her eyes closed and she moved her head some so her face buried into his leg. "But after Invidia assists me in crushing Nightclan, I can sleep easy." She had thought about how the young warrior had always did her best to perk her pride, and she smiled at that. "But before I'd go greet her, I'd like to lay like this, with you, just for a little longer."
Exhausted and not in the mood for anything, she gave a sigh and lazily responded "Not quite now, mother dearest. Maybe after a little rest?" She was still too busy thinking of how she'd get vengeance on Ivorythorn within the next rematch... Wait a minute, of course! It occurred to her just how. She remembered Foxpaw suited as her black king, and that gave an extra advantage to Leopardpaw because the cat was her very own brother. "Wait, actually, could I go play with Foxpaw for a few?" I just need to use him as another pawn
With his head low, Jetblack was tracking an odd scent he had picked up. "Sister, I stench something." He called as he neared closer to a bush not far from the border. To the relief and surprise, it was a bunny, but it had leaped out at him as it tried to get away, and with a powerful but painful kick, the black and white's eyes went missing. There were no scars but no eyes as well, his eyes were eternally closed and empty as he stood there, frozen in pain with jis jaws gaping and quivering. "MRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLL!" He yowled so powerfully that his head threw back to where his jaws faced the sky. Not far was his eyes, but they were now useless and peaking out of the snow only a little. Jetblack had now collapsed and law on his belly, sprawled out and unconcious from the pain. He was forever a sightless cat now. An Eyesore.
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #73 on: October 21, 2012, 01:02:22 pm »
((bump. This is my last rp post before I wait for the others. I had permission from okami to make lionpaw a prisoner of stormclan if that's ok with you. And What are good names for Cloudpaw and lionpaw?

Lionpaw: lionsky, liondusk, lionfern, Liongem, lionbrezze, lionstorm, lioncreek or lionfang

Cloudpaw: cloudfeather, cloudpatch, cloudsky, cloudfur, cloudpelt or cloudfrost.

And i think that our cats are kinda related to the cats from the book series:

Lionpaw: tawnypelt [due to joining another clan as apprentices]
Cloudpaw: cinderpelt [was going to be a warrior until they changed their paths later in life]
Tinytiger: Bluestar [both are loyal, caring and protective but they both lose some relatives earlier in life]
Fireblaze: dustpelt [both are snappy and protective of their kin but they losted their kits at some points]
Silverheart: spottedleaf [both are caring and wise but a Tom would have a "crush" on them at some point] ))

"sorry leopardpaw, Foxpaw is out training with his mentor. you will need to wait unless you want to go train with me" tinytiger meowed, giving leopardpaw a lick on her head.

without a word, lionpaw walked up to the river, placing one of her unsheathed paws near the water. She quickly swiped her paw into the water, catching a large silver fish in her claws. oh great starclan! This fish is almost heavy than I expected she thought. She carefully lifted her front paw with the fish, placed the paw on land and then bited the back of the fish's neck, ending it's life. "good job lionpaw, this could maybe feed two or three cats" lionpaw's eyes widen as her father praised her about her catch. sorry dad, this is going to a clan that is next to us that isn't creekclan, they need it more than us in leaf-bare she thought before picking up the fish's tail in her jaws. She watched as fireblaze picked up his catch before following him. She stopped and turned her head towards the way to the Thunderpath, abandoning her father and mentor to walk towards the Thunderpath with her fish in her jaws.
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Re: || Cats of the Battle || Remake of my Warrior Cat roleplay || Open
« Reply #74 on: October 21, 2012, 06:17:12 pm »
((*gaspeth* Sorry for taking so long! I've been busy, though my inspiration is coming back, I think owo))

"Mat, bedding, whatever." Kestrelpaw was getting flustered at this point. It was obvious she had been listening to the gossip of the elders for too long, and even though she tried to act smart with advanced words that most of her Clanmates had no idea what they were-- or meant --she didn't really know what they meant either unless she followed the words of the older cats. All she knew was that a mat was something Twolegs walked on before they entered their dens. "Just leave me alone and stop asking questions, okay?" the cream, lightly-striped she-cat hissed stubbornly, giving her pelt another final shake before taking a dive for the entrance.
Mintpaw snickered under her breath as the grumpy apprentice made her escape. "You really got her good!" she purred, twitching a dappled white ear. "I haven't seen her that annoyed in moons." The calico let out a proud mew and proceeded to gather her bedding up in a pile for her to smooth out later. "At least that got her out of here."

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I think Lionfang would match with the forename Lion, and though it's your decision, maybe Lionstorm? ^^ And for Cloudpaw, Cloudfrost sounds pretty~))


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« Reply #75 on: October 21, 2012, 08:27:18 pm »
Swiftleap narrowed his eyes and forced himself not to yawn in front of the apprentices. He took a bit of time to pause.
"....'Cause....I thought you apprentices were doing somthing else with some other warriors?"
He questioned a bit confused himself.
'No! Don't ask them that! Just get on with trying you big runt!'
The tom's inner voice yelled at him after asking.
"But anyways we should get along with training."
He added on, turning around to face the north. The rather skinny black and white tom cleared his thoart since it felt a little dry.
"Now then you need to smell the air to see if there is any signs of prey."
The tired warrior informed.
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« Reply #76 on: October 21, 2012, 10:08:09 pm »
((Ooh! Lionstorm sounds pretty good. I like Cloudpatch too.
And yay plot twist! Mind if Ivorythorn finds Lionpaw and brings her to Stormclan, then?))

Satisfied, Foxpaw let a smile spread across his maw as he raised his nose to the air. He took in a deep breath, the crisp winter air entering hus lungs. His whiskers twitched as he caught something in the air, "A vole..." The orange tabby muttered, looking at his mentor, "And a few rabbits." He added, shaking his snow-dusted pelt. He started walking toward the scent, they prey wasn't too far away.

Songfeather shook her head, smiling in amusement as Icepaw tackled her son. Once the romp was over, after Brackenpaw kicked the she-cat off of him, the calico sighed.
"Now, pay attention, you two." She gave a pointed stare at Icepaw, "You're not supposed to attack your allies." This statement was mostly teasing, she knew that the two apprentices were just playing around. "If two apprentices are taking on a full grown warrior, what they should do is leap-and-hold. Jump and latch onto me and use your strength in numbers." Songfeather dropped in a crouch again, tail lashing. "Claws sheathed...You may attack."


Bluebird hummed and patted her tail against the ground, her ear twitching as she heard her brother say something to her. "Smell something?" She asked, turning to look, but staying in her spot. Jetblack made an earth-shattering noise and crumbled to the ground, quivering in pain. "Brother?!" She asked in a panicked voice, rushing to hiss side. The she-cat had not seen what happened. She prodded his side, looking frantically around for whoever did this.
A pair of familiar eyes were half-embedded in the snow.
Bluebird screamed, stumbling back and burying her face in her brothers flank. "Wh-What happened to you, Jetblack...?" She lifted her head and looked into his eyes... Or lack thereof. He was out cold from the pain by now. The blue-tabby was on the verge of hyperventilating. Panting, she stood up shakily and yowled for help. "Nightstar! Silverheart! Please, come help!"
 


"Of course, Redear... For as long as you like..." Riverstorm muttered, nuzzling his mate's neck and drfiting into a half-sleep.

Stripedpaw's ears perked in surprise as she heard a blood-curdling scream. She brought her head out of the warriors den and looked around the camp. There was an eerie silence, then another yowl, this time for help. The calico-tabby walked at a hurried pace to the source of the noise. "It sounds like Bluebird..." She said to herself with a furrowed brow.
"Nightstar! Silverheart! Please, come help!" Stripedpaw huffed in understanding, turning on her heel and sprinting to the medicine cat den. She skidded to a stop at the entrance and peeked in, seeing Silverheart and Dawnpaw. "Hey, I think those Stormclan cats are in trouble again!"


Alright, I'm not waiting any longer... Maybe they're lost? Fat chance... Ivorythorn thought with a scowl as she paced in the bone-composed den. If Sin and Lust had not returned, she would certainly go looking for them. Heck, they're probably still looking for me! The half-blind tabby sped out of the den, bones clattering in her wake, and made a beeline for the camp exit. She didn't bother checking Redear's den first, the turkish vann would usually be wide awake and out of her den by now. Ivorythorn noted the patches of dead grass that were visible on spots were the snow had melted. Leafbare was slowly but steadily coming to an end, and she found herself a bit subdued by that. She liked the snow, but she supposed it would be better for Stormclan once the frigid temperatures ceased and the prey started showing themselves again.
She came upon the Thunderpath and narrowed her good eye to see the other side a bit better. Her bad eye could only see a blur of uncomprehensible colors. When she was certain no monsters were coming down the path, the silver tabby dropped into a crouch. She was just about to take off when she heard pawsteps padding rapidly across the peculiar terrain. Pressing her body close to the ground, she whipped her head around to see who it was. Her nose could barely make out the scent of Nightclan smothered by the stench of the Thunderpath. Remembering her fight with Leopardpaw, she growled, wondering if this intruder was the the ocelot who took her eye. Ivorythorn yowled and sped blindly to her left, jumping straight for the blur of... orange? Foxpaw?
She dug her paw into the ground, stopping her pounce short. She skidded to a stop. Holding her head at a certain angle so she could get a good look at the Nightclan cat, she confirmed that this was actually Lionpaw. The tabby blinked as options spun through her head. She could off this foolish she-cat just to spite Leopardpaw's clan. She suddenly remembered Foxpaw's reaction to the deaths of his two sisters last night... A pang of guilt went through her, though she would never admit it.
The Stormclan deity bared her teeth and raised her head in dominance, displaying her collar of dog teeth. "Why are you here?"
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« Reply #77 on: October 22, 2012, 01:26:58 pm »
This is getting deliciously interesting.))
Of course he'd be. The ocelot thought to herself in a bitter tone, giving a frustrated huff. She had to continue playing this game though until she scored check-mate with the one who scarred her muzzle. "Alright, mother dearest." she replied, getting up and stretching out a moment. Her claws unsheathed and teased the ground while she stretched before she relaxed them and stood nowmal. During the stretch, a yawn followed. "Let's begin the training."
(Redear is Time skipped to her den)
(Jetblack is currently KO)
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« Reply #78 on: October 24, 2012, 05:06:41 pm »
((bumpy bump. I'm going to do tinytiger and lionpaw and then wait for crystal before roleplaying oak and silverheart. And thanks temp and fused, I think that lionpaw should be lionstorm but I don't really know on Cloudpaw's new name. And sure fused, ivory can bring lion to stormclan.))

"ok but first, let's do the attack stalk then the leap and hold but keep your claws sheathed please. come on leopardpaw, let's go to the hills so I can teach you the moves of nightclan" tinytiger meowed, flicking her tail before starting to walk out of camp.

Lionpaw turned her head to see a silver-gray tabby, the stormclan cat showing her dog teeth collar. She walked forward the stormclan cat until she was about few paw steps away. "I am here to give you this to stormclan, my parents are too busy so I decided to do somthing nice in return of giving my sisters back to nightclan. I could hunt more but then I coulden't carry anymore fresh-kill" she said, muffed by holding the fish by the tail in her jaws. starclan, please let stormclan accept this fish and that I don't get killed she thought, her eyes fixed onto the stormclan deity.
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« Reply #79 on: October 25, 2012, 11:35:13 pm »
FINALLY I CAN GET IN FERAL HEART AGAIN! It was wigging out. Anyway, I found a very fitting video!))
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OcACR7q-UF8&feature=related

Lionpaw: Hello I'm Sweetie bell and I want to play
Leopardpaw: Hello I'm Rarity and I have to work all day (By work, she means plot to take over the forest)
Lionpaw: So can I work with you and help you a lot?
Leopardpaw: So sorry I'm busy so please keep your mouth shut
Lionpaw: Do you still hate me
Leopardpaw: I don't
Lionpaw: Can you play with me
Leopardpaw: I can't
Lionpaw: Can we do something right now?
Lionpaw: You can
Leopardpaw: I can't
Lionpaw: We can't
Leopardpaw: WE CAN'T
Lionpaw: No Sweetie! What have you DONE?! (Found out Leopardpaw's plan)
Lionpaw: I just wanted to have fun!
Leopardpaw+Lionpaw: I don't want to be your sister
just get out of my life!


Lionpaw: Hello there Rarity I'm with Apple jack(Ivorythorn)
Leopardpaw: I'm so sorry but may I have my sister back
Lionpaw: I'm not your sister anymore I have said
Leopardpaw: But Sweetie Belle-
Lionpaw: No, Un-sis! Now to me, you're dead!
Leopardpaw: I'll promise to be nicer
Lionpaw: I don't believe you liar! (So true)
Leopardpaw: How 'bout we do something else
Lionpaw: Doing what YOU want, yeah right...

And the rest isn't fitting

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