|| Pack of The Traveling Stars || Semi-Realistic || Map || Open & Accepting

[KiruWolf2000]

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Name || Liliaya
Gender || Female
Age || 2 1/2 years
Rank || Warrior or Sitter
Parents || Deceased
Mate || None
Pups || None
User || KiruWolf2000
Role Play Sample || -She yawned, stretching her paws infront of her and letting her tongue roll out of her mouth, then she stood and walked to the front of her den, soaking in the heat of the sun shining on her fur.-
A few important things; She is nearly blind, and she will not fight unless absolutely nessecary. She is a  also good hunter, mainly because she has accustomed to her disability.

[Deltatribe]

Name || Black
Gender || Female
Age || Young Adult
Rank || Warrior
Parents || unknown
Mate || none
Pups || none
User || 101RadarConnie

[Deltatribe]

aww I forgot the roleplay exampl! ok here we go

Black wandered the forest, starving as usual, when she spots a young cub. She sees it as prey and pounces. It yelped once in pain before being torn to bits by the starving older canine. When she finishes her meal she quickly leaves for she heard hurried footsteps coming.

[VampyreBlue]

@Jessie: Third person is preferred.

@Julia: Bit of a run on sentence you have there. A bit more literacy is needed to join.

[KiruWolf2000]

Should I type a new roleplay post or am I rejected?

[CrazyLion]

(Bah had problems logging in~)

You can try again, just be sure to remember to define when a sentence ends. .u. Its english class alllll oover again  >D -hit-

[KiruWolf2000]

I hate english ;_; Okay, here we go!
-Liliaya crouched down in the underbrush, intently watching her prey. It was a small furry creature, and she couldn't tell if it was a smaller brown hare or a mouse. As soon and the creature dropped back down on its small feet, she jumped, snapping its neck quickly.

[VampyreBlue]

Accepted Liliaya.
@Julia: Just remember your grammar. :3
And I put your wolf as a warrior, but, you can also say she is a sitter within the rp.

[Deltatribe]

Whats third person?

[VampyreBlue]

@Jessie
It is a type of writing style. When you use pronouns like he, she, it, etc, in the past tense.
Example: He walked from one end of the room to the other.