Author Topic: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!  (Read 189418 times)

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1090 on: April 05, 2012, 05:18:51 am »
Name:Shadow
Age:18
Gender:Femaile
Description/Picture:http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=beautiful+black+anime+wolf+&view=detail&id=CE446DD6A3A96746D3970A484EA86ACE77EF09B1&first=391&FORM=IDFRIR
Personality:She is sorta shy but has a kindred spirit, She is easy to love and to fall in love WITH and once inlove you dont want to lose her, Shes fiesty, Loves geting into trouble,Swift,Agile,hard to get,And VERY beautiful, And NEVER backs down from a fight
Skills:Fighting,Camo flage,Hunting,Speed,Agility,Sneeking,Silence,attacking
History (Optional):
Mate/crush:N/Y But whants one



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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1091 on: April 05, 2012, 07:15:57 am »
((Just pointing out, but your character is a Mary-Sue Jessie I:
For one thing, you say that she can be easily fallen in love with but that's more up to the opinion of others, you can't really just assume everyone will. A major Mary-Sue I may add. Next is you gave her way too many skills. You should probably tone her down a bit.

I also wanted to point out the picture because when I clicked on the link it said the following:
The search beautiful black anime wolf may explicit adult content and has been filtered by your Bing SafeSearch settings.

That has me concerned a bit ._.))
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"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1092 on: April 05, 2012, 08:03:21 am »
I am VERY sorry for that pic the stupid thing was COMPLEATLY messed up idk why heres a new one http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=black+anime+wolf&view=detail&id=CE446DD6A3A96746D3970A484EA86ACE77EF09B1&first=121&FORM=IDFRIR it is the same one but under diffrent serch terms It turns out you do NOT want to use Beautiful in ANY bing searches Im sorry DX And Im sorry for making her a Mary-sue

Skills:Fighting,Camo flage,Hunting,Speed,Agility,Silence


And here she is Easy to love and is a great friend and easy to get along with


And Again I am VERY sorry for the mishap Sorry DX



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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1093 on: April 05, 2012, 11:42:46 pm »
((@Jessie: Hopefully LunaSpirit will be able to look over your form soon :p


Dusk: I don't need anyone! And I'm only drinking for the joy of it, not to drown my woes! >/ -Gulps down a tankard of ale-))


Ooooh, he was getting ticked off by the female by the second. Zero's trust toward him was now wavering, though Cyris supposed it was to be expected with so many traitors popping up. But even so, Cyris had been working with this pack practically all his life and devoted his loyalty to it. This was nearly a stab in the back, and it took all his willpower to contain the look of offense and denial from appearing on his visage.

"No, sir," he said in his regular monotone, drawing his ears back and lowering his head lightly to show his submission. "I would never dream of it, I know my place and keep it and not dare challenge anyone higher than myself, and have been doing so for all my life within this pack. I have even been waiting here for your return so that I may report to you what I have heard from Xander's pack. If I am allowed to ask, may I ask what it is I have done wrong so that I may correct myself?" The innocent act was almost genuine... when it literally was. It would of been an act except Cyris was sincerely wondering what Kali had said to Zero to get him into trouble, once more reminded of a brother and sister arguing and now being confronted. Though there was a goal to it as well, in order to avoid any harm happening to his own reputation and position in the pack, he'll have to keep to Zero's good side and prove that there was nothing to worry about from him, and, hopefully, get him to be more cautious and less trustworthy of Kali in the process.
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1094 on: April 07, 2012, 06:36:22 pm »
lol Katsa! Poor Dusk!)
Lorcan awoke in the cave, he hardly remember the days that had went by in the  cave. He didn't care though, those were the most peaceful and restful days he has had in a while. THe white male slowly made his way to his feet, stretching out stiff muscles. Lorcan enjoyed the feeling of stretching without having a sharp pain surge through his body. He noticed that the others had awoken already, the voice of Karma reached his ears. The talk of leaving scared him but the she wolf had a point, the other pack knows their position and aren't afraid to attack. WHy hadn't they come for us already? Lorcan was happy  Zero and the pack hadn't come after them.. but... their lingering presence scared him more. "I agree with Karma, let's go." he said quietly looking around at the others.

Zero nodded, "Go ahead tell me what you've heard." the beta still wasn't trusting this wolf fully, first it was Vanth, now Cyris is beginning to show signs of mistrust. This saddened Zero, were could he find another wolf that was as skilled as Cyris, No where.his own voice answered the beta's question.

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1095 on: April 07, 2012, 11:31:45 pm »
   
(I'm so god damn sorry for not posting Q.Q  
 
Jessie: Please could you add a little more detail to your Appie? Don't take it personally, I asked Victoria to do so too. :3
 
Katsa: Dusk had at least gotten some satisfaction of the male's pain.
YOU DAMN LITTLE FLEA BAG! >:()
 
Xander awoke to the sound of Spades quiet and peaceful voice. "Urgh?..." He groaned turning over to face the male, still looking awfully sleepy and rather amusing. Though he really didn't feel like listening to him, as soon as he began to speak Xander found his attention locked securely on him. He did not move until Spades had finished, the conversation had seemed to have shocked the white and grey male so much that he found himself wide awake, even though it normally took Xander around a couple of hours to fully realize it was day time. (Yeah I know time has stopped moving, I was just using it to explain)
 
"Spades I..." He paused, unsure of what exactly to say and how to explain what he was feeling. "Well...Thanks," Xander let a smile find his jaws. "And there's no need to apologize for your behavior, I mean we all aren't exactly perfect here, are we?" The light coated male stated with a small amount of laughter, though nothing was really funny....
 
Xander still continued to have flash backs to the time he snapped his jaws shut around Karma's shoulder...

 
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Thirteen had been awake for quite a long while, it was likely that she hadn't even slept. Never the less, she looked as sharp and alert as always. Her green eyes glaring at the familiar setting sun, reminding her of how she missed the moving world. "I agree with Karma," The feline said in hopeful tone. "We should get moving as quickly as possible," Thirteen could not wait until she saw her Mother again...

 
~~~~~

The white and grey male let out a deep sigh. "What's the big rush all of a sudden? We have all the time in the world right?..." Thirteen suddenly shot Xander a sharp and hateful glance that he did not know the meaning of. He didn't know about how Mother was slowly dieing along with the world itself....

(Just realized how rubbishly wrote this damn post is! : ( Sorry )
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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1096 on: April 07, 2012, 11:43:37 pm »
(Oops! I forgot Kali! : ( )

Kali could not contain her giggles of satisfaction as she watched the alpha and Cyris from a fair distance. With her eyes flickering with a menacing and flirtatiously dangerous appearance, she returned to Zero's side, ears and pupils alert and absorbed in the drama.

Her sickly expression didn't leave her maw until a certain sentence slid of Cyris's tongue.
 "I may report to you what I have heard from Xander's pack,"
 
Damn him, not only does he play the innocent little dog but he tries to make Zero view him as useful! A snarl escaped her jaws, and her silver eyes became fixed upon Cyris's, her blood bubbling with hate and anger. "Honestly! You pathetic little runt!"

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1097 on: April 08, 2012, 12:02:45 am »
((Nobody likes Dusk xD
I do though!

Dusk: I don't need your sympathy.

....Right, that's why no one likes him >.>

YOU DAMN LITTLE FLEA BAG!

Dusk: HEY!.... I don't have fleas ;)
Besides, you hurt someone, you get hurt back. An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth [evil smirk].))


Karma saw the look Thirteen had cast at Xander, knowing that he had no clue what was happening to Mother. Her sharp electric-irises were soften with understanding, and she turned to the white-grey male. "In case you forgot," she began, her voice in monotone, "we're being chased after by your old pack. We've spent too much time here, why they haven't attacked yet worries me and I believe most of us." Here her eyes drifted to Lorcan, seeing how anxious he seemed to be getting as well and giving a nod in appreciation to agreeing with her suggestion. Thankfully she was able to nod now without flinching in pain.

"Yes," Dusk now spoke, standing near the cave entrance. "The sooner we leave the better. It's possible they think we've destroyed each other on our own, if so we can take advantage of that." His gaze returned to look at everyone within the cave. "I'm not sure how much I believe about this 'Mother' and how we can fix the Ribbons with love or whatever it was the feline said, but it doesn't seem like we have anywhere else to go. Thirteen, will you lead us to our destination?"


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Cyris dipped his head to oblige the order, ignoring the look Kali had upon her visage. "Yes, sir. You see-" he was cut off by the sudden growl and comment Kali gave, crimson irises drifting to her. Meeting her gaze, they shown with mild puzzlement. "I'm sorry, Kali, have I done something to offend you?" he asked. "I am only about to report to our Beta, if I have I apologize and will be willing to discuss it further with you, but after I have reported to Beta Zero." He gave another dip of his head in her direction, outwardly just a wolf obeying an order but inwardly he was smiling slyly at Kali. You're pushing me too far, he thought to himself. You are playing with a dangerous opponent, Kali.

"As I was saying," he returned his gaze to Zero. "It appears as if a new member has been added to Xander's pack, a few actually. Two wolves, a male and female, a pup, and strangely enough, a feline. I'm not sure why a cat is able to move, so far we've only seen wolves able to move when time froze. But this cat, Thirteen I believe her name was, has offered them a chance to fix the Ribbons." Here Cyris shifted between his paws, expression showing how uncomfortable he was to share the rest of the information. "It gets slightly complicated from here," he continued, "but apparently this cat was sent by someone she called 'Mother', claiming to be Mother Nature herself. The feline said she sent her to Xander's pack because they held potential to fixing the Ribbons, saying something about being fixed with 'love'."

Cyris gave a pause for the words to sink in. "I do not know how much of this is true, but it's apparent that Xander's pack is going to follow this cat to this 'Mother'."
The Hobbit

"Where did you go to, if I may ask?" said Thorin to Gandolf as they rode along.
"To look ahead," said he.
"And what brought you back in the nick of time?" "Looking behind,"...

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1098 on: April 08, 2012, 01:43:16 am »
Spades got up as well "thats somone im not paranoid about anymore..." he said mumbling to himself. He then followed Xander ready to get this "journey" overwith. "I still dont understand how mother nature could fix this, its like something outside of this made it happen" he thought to himself as he followed Xander
((short :P))

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Re: The Ribbons Of Time ~ Semi-realistic wolf RP ~ STILL ACCEPTING!
« Reply #1099 on: April 08, 2012, 06:14:33 pm »
(Gunna wait for Silver before posting :3 Cause I'm such a damn nice person x

Xander: WHY YOUH SOO MEAN DUSK! -Runs and sits in corner crying and eating chocolate-
Me: Sorry...hes on his period..)